tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post5555117867179082982..comments2023-09-22T07:03:03.280-04:00Comments on The Clarity of Night: Entry #55Jason Evanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14851992219298316168noreply@blogger.comBlogger31125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-64702520181498297002008-07-24T17:08:00.000-04:002008-07-24T17:08:00.000-04:00Whoa. Embarrassing. He can claim that he meant t...Whoa. Embarrassing. He can claim that he meant to do that. Nice cut to the reality. You handled that well.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-24376216511932767792008-07-24T10:45:00.000-04:002008-07-24T10:45:00.000-04:00thank you, klgilbert... seems google at my earlier...thank you, klgilbert... seems google at my earlier reply :(laughingwolfhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08873675614347328116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-9733431069587375232008-07-21T08:48:00.000-04:002008-07-21T08:48:00.000-04:00Love those "Walter Mitty" moments!Good writing ski...Love those "Walter Mitty" moments!<BR/>Good writing skills. Nice ending.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-5382832723788254382008-07-20T19:33:00.000-04:002008-07-20T19:33:00.000-04:00sameera, thank you :)sameera, thank you :)laughingwolfhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08873675614347328116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-89956991635364703432008-07-20T16:03:00.000-04:002008-07-20T16:03:00.000-04:00Glad he was safe :)Liked his spirit.Well written!Glad he was safe :)<BR/><BR/>Liked his spirit.Well written!Sameera Ansarihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05249126041067834608noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-80262468550568601532008-07-20T07:39:00.000-04:002008-07-20T07:39:00.000-04:00thx bud, appreciate your comment :)thx bud, appreciate your comment :)laughingwolfhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08873675614347328116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-75445640689732494202008-07-20T07:34:00.000-04:002008-07-20T07:34:00.000-04:00ha ha ha ha ha ha ha wonderfulha ha ha ha ha ha ha wonderfulthe walking manhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10058913927297370740noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-72651595449610214252008-07-18T11:02:00.000-04:002008-07-18T11:02:00.000-04:00thx poso :)thx poso :)laughingwolfhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08873675614347328116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-45786193223249373282008-07-18T07:39:00.000-04:002008-07-18T07:39:00.000-04:00Nice Mitty-esque homage.Nice Mitty-esque homage.Posol'stvo the Medvedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00573435137467134333noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-4469547774733714102008-07-17T20:04:00.000-04:002008-07-17T20:04:00.000-04:00vesper and aerin, thx so much for your kind commen...vesper and aerin, thx so much for your kind comments :)laughingwolfhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08873675614347328116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-63597866668807934502008-07-17T12:39:00.000-04:002008-07-17T12:39:00.000-04:00This was set up so well. I was sort of dreading.....This was set up so well. I was sort of dreading...er, expecting...a he-got-smashed-to-bloody-bits ending. Yay for twists! This is just a really fun piece overall.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-57164505613760507412008-07-17T11:51:00.000-04:002008-07-17T11:51:00.000-04:00Daydreams are good… Your words captured well the h...Daydreams are good… Your words captured well the high and the low.<BR/><BR/>Excellent last line! (I do that all the time...) :-)Vesperhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12417602625059442986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-24212784019891528622008-07-17T06:58:00.000-04:002008-07-17T06:58:00.000-04:00thank you, bernita... praise indeed :)thank you, bernita... praise indeed :)laughingwolfhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08873675614347328116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-89889023510628590892008-07-17T06:08:00.000-04:002008-07-17T06:08:00.000-04:00Lw, this is great!The eternal daydream - even a li...Lw, this is great!<BR/>The eternal daydream - even a little girl in mommie's high heels is dreaming a form of it.<BR/>Loved the internal dialogue.<BR/>Well done!Bernitahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05264585685253812090noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-72595764306630146922008-07-16T21:48:00.000-04:002008-07-16T21:48:00.000-04:00lol thx missy :)lol thx missy :)laughingwolfhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08873675614347328116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-33735135762270918372008-07-16T21:31:00.000-04:002008-07-16T21:31:00.000-04:00Dude, that was me back in the day. You totally ca...Dude, that was me back in the day. You totally captured it. Fun!Missyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16638784910676212171noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-7566499507860936092008-07-16T20:21:00.000-04:002008-07-16T20:21:00.000-04:00thx chris and sarah, glad you enjoyed it :)thx chris and sarah, glad you enjoyed it :)laughingwolfhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08873675614347328116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-91246892207258542642008-07-16T20:13:00.000-04:002008-07-16T20:13:00.000-04:00I loved this one. Your writing is so vibrant and r...I loved this one. Your writing is so vibrant and realistic. I could see this guy with his string of curses and raised middle finger to the conventional world. <BR/><BR/>Maybe he'll get there someday. ;)<BR/><BR/>Brilliant job!Sarah Hinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13888406261817690010noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-55494938562793425592008-07-16T20:02:00.000-04:002008-07-16T20:02:00.000-04:00Endearing and funny!I truly enjoyed reading this o...Endearing and funny!<BR/><BR/>I truly enjoyed reading this one. Very well done!Chris Eldinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11794946908789120139noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-44485509329799322482008-07-16T19:28:00.000-04:002008-07-16T19:28:00.000-04:00thx bro... glad it became clear and you enjoyed it...thx bro... glad it became clear and you enjoyed it ;)laughingwolfhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08873675614347328116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-77448120526984316292008-07-16T19:21:00.000-04:002008-07-16T19:21:00.000-04:00Ha! You got in the moped gag that I couldn't fit ...Ha! You got in the moped gag that I couldn't fit into my story! Nice work. I was slightly confused by the 'Elite 80' reference (they don't sell them in the UK as far as I know), but I soon clicked.........<BR/><BR/>Excellent piece.iLL Manhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08107892879700381858noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-31967918681206375762008-07-16T18:55:00.000-04:002008-07-16T18:55:00.000-04:00i had a lotta fun with it, too... thx janey :)i had a lotta fun with it, too... thx janey :)laughingwolfhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08873675614347328116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-53530485639509385572008-07-16T17:51:00.000-04:002008-07-16T17:51:00.000-04:00What's life without a daydream. I love his foul-m...What's life without a daydream. I love his foul-mouthed internal dialogue, really ripping up the biker fantasy. The end got me - loved it!<BR/><BR/>Great piece LW - really enjoyed it!JaneyVhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04951739945670483199noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-84136216913050596592008-07-16T17:30:00.000-04:002008-07-16T17:30:00.000-04:00thx all, greatly appreciated :)thx all, greatly appreciated :)laughingwolfhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08873675614347328116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-65877758438876519702008-07-16T17:06:00.000-04:002008-07-16T17:06:00.000-04:00Energetic tale.Energetic tale.BernardLhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09722619048888613647noreply@blogger.com