tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post6107916126540321903..comments2023-09-22T07:03:03.280-04:00Comments on The Clarity of Night: Entry #18Jason Evanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14851992219298316168noreply@blogger.comBlogger25125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-5625095706301913902011-07-28T21:15:48.459-04:002011-07-28T21:15:48.459-04:00A great metaphor in this and well written. It rem...A great metaphor in this and well written. It reminds me of a different version of the Twilight theme of loving someone, but posing a real danger of killing her.<br /><br />Congrats on Forties Club!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-13499240391336545412011-07-23T04:49:13.271-04:002011-07-23T04:49:13.271-04:00LOL @Tim - I was thinking the very same thing.
Li...LOL @Tim - I was thinking the very same thing.<br /><br />Lisa - I think you did a great job here. It was sexy, terrifying and ultimately, poignant. I feel very sorry for poor Aidan but I have to say Megan? - not so much! She should have listened to the word 'NO'!JaneyVhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04951739945670483199noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-61271241292878597182011-07-22T21:22:41.941-04:002011-07-22T21:22:41.941-04:00Touching. I really feel for Aidan at the end when ...Touching. I really feel for Aidan at the end when it dawns how dangerous his heat will become and what he will lose.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14170148559429001125noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-2393266236866124042011-07-21T20:11:55.519-04:002011-07-21T20:11:55.519-04:00Thank you so much! I just have to say LOL to Richa...Thank you so much! I just have to say LOL to Richard. You really made me laugh!Lisa Gail Greenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03648323153868702165noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-84121531111337950612011-07-20T01:19:11.690-04:002011-07-20T01:19:11.690-04:00This created a picture in front of my eyes while r...This created a picture in front of my eyes while reading..<br /><br />execellently portrayed.yaminihttp://expressmyway.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-9584270854651946372011-07-19T23:23:38.134-04:002011-07-19T23:23:38.134-04:00My mom said that would happen to me if I had sex b...My mom said that would happen to me if I had sex before marriage.<br /><br />I thought this was sharp and smartly written, though it freaked me out.:-)Richard Levangiehttp://richardlevangie.com/blog/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-43569416739456601772011-07-19T22:54:29.306-04:002011-07-19T22:54:29.306-04:00Thanks everyone for the comments! It's been a ...Thanks everyone for the comments! It's been a crazy weekend so I haven't had much chance to respond until now. I love that so many of you felt for my characters. :DLisa Gail Greenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03648323153868702165noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-40784127603410604042011-07-19T15:03:02.883-04:002011-07-19T15:03:02.883-04:00You know the old saying - play with fire and you&#...You know the old saying - play with fire and you'll turn into a pile of ashes. :) Great story! ~Jana A.bluesugarpoethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14775769108087898456noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-53568533485472234752011-07-18T21:13:53.983-04:002011-07-18T21:13:53.983-04:00Too hawt to handle, baby! This was an entertaining...Too hawt to handle, baby! This was an entertaining read, Lisa. You rock girl!<br />Hope all is well for you. ;-)Jodi MacArthurhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13373591664178281529noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-33845934448513987982011-07-18T19:09:42.387-04:002011-07-18T19:09:42.387-04:00Whao!!!! My goodness!! Poor Aidan and poor Megan. ...Whao!!!! My goodness!! Poor Aidan and poor Megan. This is wonderful - a horror story to remember! Thank you, take care<br />xOld Kittyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13185547869183611159noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-25116413296114993622011-07-18T10:32:10.757-04:002011-07-18T10:32:10.757-04:00See...this is why you never piss off the Gods...cu...See...this is why you never piss off the Gods...cursed to flames, uncontrollably...good grief!<br /><br />Dottie :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08688849410604429533noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-78760395358599911112011-07-17T02:48:45.713-04:002011-07-17T02:48:45.713-04:00I didn't want it to end like that! I wanted to...I didn't want it to end like that! I wanted to tell him to be firmer with her, to move away, and to tell her to listen. So I think you could say it affected me!fairyhedgehoghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14141089706966852951noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-17970842782034967392011-07-16T23:13:56.602-04:002011-07-16T23:13:56.602-04:00Mikki and David said it best, I think. This is rea...Mikki and David said it best, I think. This is really well put together. The pain is exquisite, and the way you showed her death as if it was instantaneous gives us a measure of pity. Poor dears.PJDhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05028687955957107957noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-63140691567258595882011-07-15T08:29:44.422-04:002011-07-15T08:29:44.422-04:00Wow. I can't decide whether to be turned on or...Wow. I can't decide whether to be turned on or horrified.Jacehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13923175310269099458noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-7146663326826103342011-07-15T06:51:47.721-04:002011-07-15T06:51:47.721-04:00Mikki neatly sums up my thoughts on this. I'm ...Mikki neatly sums up my thoughts on this. I'm impressed by the play on gender roles too.Preciehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05071233480999640713noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-86005259490755835492011-07-15T06:50:50.928-04:002011-07-15T06:50:50.928-04:00aww, now that is a definite curse for him :( the p...aww, now that is a definite curse for him :( the poor thing...SzélsőFahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11600289147447182465noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-79238773645553706322011-07-15T02:49:24.954-04:002011-07-15T02:49:24.954-04:00yowza - what a curse!
I can think of worse ways t...yowza - what a curse!<br /><br />I can think of worse ways to go...Jade L Blackwaterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15321787298101881675noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-70339514102598515742011-07-15T00:54:44.540-04:002011-07-15T00:54:44.540-04:00Ouch! The Adam/Eve theme, in a macabre, sexy way. ...Ouch! The Adam/Eve theme, in a macabre, sexy way. I thought he was going to burn, so a wonderful surprise, even if it is the woman's fault.pegjethttp://pegjet.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-78475527045392253432011-07-15T00:40:45.664-04:002011-07-15T00:40:45.664-04:00That's a bunmer for poor Megan and Aidan.That's a bunmer for poor Megan and Aidan.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16518183823230864763noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-72945101240486974082011-07-15T00:34:04.261-04:002011-07-15T00:34:04.261-04:00Ouch! Poor Megan... if only he'd been a bit mo...Ouch! Poor Megan... if only he'd been a bit more upfront with her!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-61584926384453039892011-07-15T00:27:54.477-04:002011-07-15T00:27:54.477-04:00When are women going to learn? No means No.When are women going to learn? No means No.Tim VanSant Writeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17614259042362664840noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-71570693507056146742011-07-15T00:21:33.842-04:002011-07-15T00:21:33.842-04:00Too bad she couldn't survive that; it sounded ...Too bad she couldn't survive that; it sounded pretty hot.Maria Mainerohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12839883252262642051noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-37237394960081312702011-07-15T00:10:50.922-04:002011-07-15T00:10:50.922-04:00Holy cow, Lisa! Powerful scene, it gave me chills....Holy cow, Lisa! Powerful scene, it gave me chills. I love it!Bethany Elizabethhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12829932931010851406noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-6787652785685102222011-07-14T23:28:31.083-04:002011-07-14T23:28:31.083-04:00Whoa. This was just . . . disturbing, in a macabre...Whoa. This was just . . . disturbing, in a macabre, poignant way. What a usage of the prompt! Every line smacks with Aidan's suffering and pain. Nice work.<br /><br />Thanks for sharing!Michele Zugnonihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12394802719932859470noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-51245311522111314452011-07-14T21:53:37.303-04:002011-07-14T21:53:37.303-04:00Well dang for him and her! She should have listeni...Well dang for him and her! She should have listening, huh? :( Bummer! :)Aimee Lainehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15201246474625590886noreply@blogger.com