tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post6152304049146394802..comments2023-09-22T07:03:03.280-04:00Comments on The Clarity of Night: Entry #44Jason Evanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14851992219298316168noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-9449774056603058502007-08-07T21:50:00.000-04:002007-08-07T21:50:00.000-04:00The notion of evil done in a beautiful place is co...The notion of evil done in a beautiful place is compelling. Well written.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-58878544235735549362007-08-05T07:31:00.000-04:002007-08-05T07:31:00.000-04:00Interesting take.Liked the use of dream as a subco...Interesting take.<BR/>Liked the use of dream as a subconscious warning.Bernitahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05264585685253812090noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-26762300750818435572007-08-02T13:44:00.000-04:002007-08-02T13:44:00.000-04:00I like the interlacing of dream and reality!I like the interlacing of dream and reality!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-12017254237420454942007-08-02T03:59:00.000-04:002007-08-02T03:59:00.000-04:00I like the use of dream premonition. A compelling...I like the use of dream premonition. A compelling story - would very much like to see it as part of something bigger.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04871239587214383387noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-56274289881014931792007-08-01T16:34:00.000-04:002007-08-01T16:34:00.000-04:00Well written. Nice work. The ending leaves us wit...Well written. Nice work. The ending leaves us with a few questions.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-9526701556285470632007-07-31T16:19:00.000-04:002007-07-31T16:19:00.000-04:00Quite mysterious! I like how reality and dream min...Quite mysterious! I like how reality and dream mingle. Nice ending.SzélsőFahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11600289147447182465noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-23816413885142804852007-07-31T13:22:00.000-04:002007-07-31T13:22:00.000-04:00Cool and very well writtenCool and very well writtenwrath999https://www.blogger.com/profile/10964105112015979524noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-83628490163301032872007-07-31T07:36:00.000-04:002007-07-31T07:36:00.000-04:00The voice and the writing are very nicely done. It...The voice and the writing are very nicely done. It seems this is part of a larger story. I'd definitely read on.<BR/><BR/>--takodaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-42917439212366380592007-07-31T07:21:00.000-04:002007-07-31T07:21:00.000-04:00Nice twist. grim but compellingNice twist. grim but compellingAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-39422228578279392402007-07-31T05:14:00.000-04:002007-07-31T05:14:00.000-04:00Interesting use of two voices. My favourite senten...Interesting use of two voices. My favourite sentence was: <BR/>The blood had dried to a dark rust on her skin and the forest floor was matted in her hair. <BR/>An enjoyable read.Judehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14121286194338647357noreply@blogger.com