tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post6685765844620711570..comments2023-09-22T07:03:03.280-04:00Comments on The Clarity of Night: Entry #25Jason Evanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14851992219298316168noreply@blogger.comBlogger40125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-19611055580049013312010-01-23T01:39:49.473-05:002010-01-23T01:39:49.473-05:00Ah, the vultures sold him out, rightly deserved! ...Ah, the vultures sold him out, rightly deserved! Also, creepy!<br /><br />Congrats on the H/M!<br /><br />Dottie :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08688849410604429533noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-10929738418971754232010-01-21T08:32:57.376-05:002010-01-21T08:32:57.376-05:00Thank you all for your kind comments! I truly appr...Thank you all for your kind comments! I truly appreciate them.Loren Eatonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12488412683340389286noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-53400466684856880862010-01-19T17:15:42.491-05:002010-01-19T17:15:42.491-05:00Dear Entrants #1-105,
I have read your pieces so ...Dear Entrants #1-105,<br /><br />I have read your pieces so that I can fairly participate in the Readers' Choice vote. (I read all of them through last week, before I started commenting.) I <i>will</i> be coming back around to offer <a href="http://www.insearchofgiants.com/2010/01/commenting-on-silhouette.html" rel="nofollow">my keep/tweak comment</a>, but I didn't want anyone to snark. <br /><br />Cheers,<br />Aerin (#236)<br /><br />BTW, it's perfectly fine if you still want to snark, but this way you can choose a more appropriate subject, like the merits of jarred baby food or B's exclusive use of his first initialAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-53537960149681942422010-01-18T08:35:08.632-05:002010-01-18T08:35:08.632-05:00Love (so to speak) the cold, calculating killer. T...Love (so to speak) the cold, calculating killer. Truly love that he got what he deserved.Deb Smythenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-49455025144406076102010-01-17T18:17:27.408-05:002010-01-17T18:17:27.408-05:00I've dealt with enough Websters to last a life...I've dealt with enough Websters to last a life time. Your characterization of him was spot on. I enjoyed your story immensely.james r tomlinsonnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-37323896997070651482010-01-17T00:55:06.485-05:002010-01-17T00:55:06.485-05:00Harrowing and very well toldHarrowing and very well toldMcKoalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01457446171624585099noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-53126518586215616152010-01-16T02:22:21.848-05:002010-01-16T02:22:21.848-05:00Poe would be proud...
great progressionPoe would be proud...<br />great progressionKatherine Tomlinsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09696623795926663895noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-61001216332129944742010-01-13T16:40:29.962-05:002010-01-13T16:40:29.962-05:00wicked and just creepywicked and just creepyMichael Solenderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01120045114297450520noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-75036231487369110002010-01-13T13:42:45.223-05:002010-01-13T13:42:45.223-05:00kept me glued till the end!kept me glued till the end!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-4359311612405683232010-01-12T17:44:34.818-05:002010-01-12T17:44:34.818-05:00this has a nice ring to it. I like it.this has a nice ring to it. I like it.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-13983834905270964032010-01-12T08:26:39.857-05:002010-01-12T08:26:39.857-05:00I'm always happy to read a story that's ac...I'm always happy to read a story that's actually a story and not a 250 word description of a bird flying over the landscape and how it feels to be a bird. It's comforting to know that murder and mayhem is what the person sitting next to me in the coffee shop may be thinking about when they are shown a photograph of a bird and asked to describe what comes to mind. Good job.Jimmie Veenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-81731013649931396372010-01-11T23:29:50.492-05:002010-01-11T23:29:50.492-05:00I like the distance created by not having any spok...I like the distance created by not having any spoken dialogue. I also agree with Bernita.AidanFhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09876041003278004627noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-39463578748586746162010-01-11T23:25:51.560-05:002010-01-11T23:25:51.560-05:00Fabulously creepy!Fabulously creepy!AngelConradiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09423318903817661244noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-7540351298473724712010-01-11T21:23:04.423-05:002010-01-11T21:23:04.423-05:00Most excellent! Riveting and well paced. REally ...Most excellent! Riveting and well paced. REally nice ending.catvibehttp://www.catvibe.net/blognoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-60972284677037322862010-01-11T14:23:53.329-05:002010-01-11T14:23:53.329-05:00Riveting. Great tone and I love that the birds giv...Riveting. Great tone and I love that the birds give him away. Nice take on the prompt.<br /><br />This one is a contender for me.Laurelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06120847492230531939noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-77221603319008048802010-01-11T06:32:35.529-05:002010-01-11T06:32:35.529-05:00Excellent.
Deft, lean writing.Excellent.<br /><br />Deft, lean writing.austerehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16839224877080864005noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-79728252107340777312010-01-10T16:07:40.414-05:002010-01-10T16:07:40.414-05:00Chilling. Both in content and pacing. It's har...Chilling. Both in content and pacing. It's hard to believe it's only 250 words - the story reads so much bigger.kashersnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-76409238373747817722010-01-10T14:42:04.402-05:002010-01-10T14:42:04.402-05:00Ah, the chilling sounds of alliteration. No sane ...Ah, the chilling sounds of alliteration. No sane mind thinks like that.Scattercathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00302815654553659644noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-7222293951843083452010-01-09T14:07:32.546-05:002010-01-09T14:07:32.546-05:00I liked it! I could feel his panic. Good job.I liked it! I could feel his panic. Good job.Bethhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13860024042221101257noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-80578359709949692732010-01-09T06:40:48.499-05:002010-01-09T06:40:48.499-05:00.. don't you just love it when girls take flig..... don't you just love it when girls take flight.Amias (ljm and liquidplastic)https://www.blogger.com/profile/14722413697537828830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-47289221241395476262010-01-08T21:28:30.781-05:002010-01-08T21:28:30.781-05:00Chilling, creepy, compelling. All of the above! Br...Chilling, creepy, compelling. All of the above! Brrrr...TLhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01613912638668399684noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-3775537429318087672010-01-08T21:03:01.394-05:002010-01-08T21:03:01.394-05:00I smiled throughout - much like the corpse. Outsta...I smiled throughout - much like the corpse. Outstanding mood, sustained tension. Bravo.Stephen Hillhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10877845819239556828noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-71744787044394968302010-01-08T20:50:58.811-05:002010-01-08T20:50:58.811-05:00creepy... suits me just fine!creepy... suits me just fine!laughingwolfhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08873675614347328116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-39623240270170446702010-01-08T20:43:13.062-05:002010-01-08T20:43:13.062-05:00Yes, "creepy" is the right word; and com...Yes, "creepy" is the right word; and compellingly written.Terrihttp://misterri.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-18371027515215484362010-01-08T16:06:43.625-05:002010-01-08T16:06:43.625-05:00Golden, Loren.Golden, Loren.B. Nagelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07620736939701035617noreply@blogger.com