tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post6702430279650750532..comments2023-09-22T07:03:03.280-04:00Comments on The Clarity of Night: MidsummerJason Evanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14851992219298316168noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-56915842081046052412011-08-05T03:42:18.697-04:002011-08-05T03:42:18.697-04:00Ouch, now the whole long day, the refrain in my he...Ouch, now the whole long day, the refrain in my head would be "the air does not move". Beautiful work.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04283371140346602856noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-26101089560223582192011-08-04T11:15:24.860-04:002011-08-04T11:15:24.860-04:00Erratic Thoughts, that's a wonderful addition!...Erratic Thoughts, that's a wonderful addition! I love when people pick up a theme and add their own creativity.<br /><br />Szelsofa, I wanted one with a different setting, but yes, I thought this one had that stillness to it also.<br /><br />Phatichar, thanks for saying so!<br /><br />Lee, much appreciated.<br /><br />Vesper, I would think that you can see days and moments like this too.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-6309725512320659562011-08-03T22:53:02.229-04:002011-08-03T22:53:02.229-04:00I can feel the heat in that air that doesn't m...I can feel the heat in that air that doesn't move and that it's only midsummer it's a very nice thought...Vesperhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12417602625059442986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-19065820838632679752011-08-03T12:43:25.034-04:002011-08-03T12:43:25.034-04:00Nice piece and I loved Erratic Thoughts add on...Nice piece and I loved Erratic Thoughts add on...Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14126916093660757322noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-11902861255602703232011-08-03T05:56:34.744-04:002011-08-03T05:56:34.744-04:00"the air does not move" - helps me pictu..."the air does not move" - helps me picture the setting beautifully.phaticharhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01458914636112852499noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-7353584182422457562011-08-03T03:22:48.365-04:002011-08-03T03:22:48.365-04:00and even the road seems halted :) a good choice of...and even the road seems halted :) a good choice of picture to this heavy-air poem.SzélsőFahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11600289147447182465noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-22148894807677025932011-08-03T02:14:34.949-04:002011-08-03T02:14:34.949-04:00nice pic and superb imagery in there...:)
A bud f...nice pic and superb imagery in there...:)<br /><br />A bud fluttered open<br />Blushed against the warmth<br />the air does not moveErratic Thoughtshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14852558150033296079noreply@blogger.com