tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post7031923355390499482..comments2023-09-22T07:03:03.280-04:00Comments on The Clarity of Night: Entry #65Jason Evanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14851992219298316168noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-90892878913742214672009-07-26T20:03:49.821-04:002009-07-26T20:03:49.821-04:00I liked the names and physical descriptions of thi...I liked the names and physical descriptions of this used, chipped world.<br /><br />High marks for pacing and technical elements.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-15163220470291707112009-07-20T18:28:58.459-04:002009-07-20T18:28:58.459-04:00Wonderful, clear, compelling writing!Wonderful, clear, compelling writing!Jade L Blackwaterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15321787298101881675noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-87132196055711281932009-07-18T06:30:19.985-04:002009-07-18T06:30:19.985-04:00Bloody hell! Enjoyed it thoroughly!Bloody hell! Enjoyed it thoroughly!JaneyVhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04951739945670483199noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-6853507404087062542009-07-15T13:29:02.002-04:002009-07-15T13:29:02.002-04:00Echo all the comments, especially Laurel and Catvi...Echo all the comments, especially Laurel and Catvibe. Rough, gritty. Cool.PJDhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05028687955957107957noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-45276965389289773042009-07-13T12:28:54.412-04:002009-07-13T12:28:54.412-04:00Great flow to this story. Almost a new-wave beat ...Great flow to this story. Almost a new-wave beat poetry feel to it.Kurt Hendrickshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16183333362118745153noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-5806183315190679302009-07-12T16:16:04.252-04:002009-07-12T16:16:04.252-04:00Great descriptions. Gritty, realistic. Love the vo...Great descriptions. Gritty, realistic. Love the voice.Sarah Laurensonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09252565450452195395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-16384821389792973922009-07-12T15:40:51.524-04:002009-07-12T15:40:51.524-04:00ah well, shit happens! :O lolah well, shit happens! :O lollaughingwolfhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08873675614347328116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-77446863975413571092009-07-12T09:30:26.823-04:002009-07-12T09:30:26.823-04:00Dark dark tale with an eerie creepiness all along....Dark dark tale with an eerie creepiness all along.<br /><br />Felt more watching than reading. I could practically smell the place. Ew.<br /><br />Great work. Liked it a lot.Aniket Thakkarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18311954967682696734noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-16844044546589222092009-07-12T08:38:17.409-04:002009-07-12T08:38:17.409-04:00Vivid descriptions :)Vivid descriptions :)Adishahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06757598390608351897noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-70176918532106339922009-07-12T08:04:28.078-04:002009-07-12T08:04:28.078-04:00Dark and creepy! I like the voice in your writing...Dark and creepy! I like the voice in your writing, it works well.Catherine Viberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01354073276671196477noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-79797198067128855442009-07-12T07:42:32.010-04:002009-07-12T07:42:32.010-04:00Intense and very visual!
I love a good nickname,...Intense and very visual! <br /><br />I love a good nickname, and for this one, I'm left with a smile---there's a children's book agent with the last name of Bowen, and her blog has a bunny mascot.<br />Coinky?<br />;-)Chris Eldinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16732006129353079344noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-77732218164735935452009-07-12T07:16:17.434-04:002009-07-12T07:16:17.434-04:00This one pulled me in from the first word. I think...This one pulled me in from the first word. I think it's a winner!Karenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12003379181294550035noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-19902245032546841222009-07-12T06:26:34.545-04:002009-07-12T06:26:34.545-04:00You definitely have one of the most original setti...You definitely have one of the most original settings for this competition, and the title fits, but for some reason I felt the ending was a bit abrupt. Still, your details are crisp--very visual. I liked it.JR's Thumbprintshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10479324326541901987noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-13780447247533542052009-07-12T06:21:43.057-04:002009-07-12T06:21:43.057-04:00Unique and very visual. Excellent
alexUnique and very visual. Excellent<br /><br />alexwrath999https://www.blogger.com/profile/10964105112015979524noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-39700648033410560092009-07-12T03:56:21.150-04:002009-07-12T03:56:21.150-04:00Excellent. A dark Wonderland indeed.Excellent. A dark Wonderland indeed.Rachel Greenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13048590167153841615noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-69180928452255994412009-07-12T00:56:13.691-04:002009-07-12T00:56:13.691-04:00This was great! Gritty, good names, great descript...This was great! Gritty, good names, great descriptions. I can just see a cockroach scuttling across the table.<br /><br />Vicious ending, too.Laurelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06120847492230531939noreply@blogger.com