tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post7252043399545595371..comments2023-09-22T07:03:03.280-04:00Comments on The Clarity of Night: SEED, Part 3Jason Evanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14851992219298316168noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-2117439074564899192010-02-28T10:40:15.196-05:002010-02-28T10:40:15.196-05:00Leah, that's cool. :) You either enjoy the t...Leah, that's cool. :) You either enjoy the technical angle of this one, or you don't. If you do, it has its own drama. If you don't, it's major glaze-ville. The good news is that as I look forward in this series, I think this is the last really technical part.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-48878791858273208592010-02-27T23:58:08.280-05:002010-02-27T23:58:08.280-05:00Well, I have two thoughts, for what it's worth...Well, I have two thoughts, for what it's worth (free :).<br /><br />1) I admire your knowledge of this stuff, and I read enough to see that you probably know what you're talking about.<br /><br />2) My eyes glazed over lol <br /><br />I'm just being honest. I know Sci-fi has it's own particular group of fans, but get lost on the techie sorts of details. That's not a bad thing, it's only that it's not my thing.<br /><br />If I were reading this story (which I am, but I mean if I bought the novel or whatever) I'd be hooked with the beginning. Then I'd gloss and speed-read over this part, searching for parts I need to know so I'm not lost as we go on. If the story is predominantly this stuff, I'd eventually lose interest. But if we get back real quick to the human sort of stuff, or stuff I understand, I'd probably be fine.<br /><br />It's not about you, it's me, and I'm just an honest sort :DLeah McClellanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18183361669157109674noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-55177053445781946692010-02-25T23:29:25.963-05:002010-02-25T23:29:25.963-05:00Aniket, I have a special plan for this story once ...Aniket, I have a special plan for this story once it's complete!<br /><br />Nevine, I hope the drama and human element will be ramping up now, although I do appreciate you liking the technical feel. We need some smart sci-fi too. Some Star Trek along with our Star Wars. (At this point, I have 12 parts planned.)<br /><br />Catvibe, its process is like a life process. It does feel kind of like an entity.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-32043506050043998562010-02-25T22:05:56.514-05:002010-02-25T22:05:56.514-05:00I love how you made the machinery feel alive.I love how you made the machinery feel alive.catvibehttp://www.catvibe.net/blognoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-32378837077066484152010-02-25T08:40:45.072-05:002010-02-25T08:40:45.072-05:00At the beginning, it felt like I was reading a sci...At the beginning, it felt like I was reading a science article in a journal.... it was that technical. And that was great! And then, the story slipped in, but still delivered with the voice from the science journal article. And that was awesome! I'm really enjoying this story. Is there more?<br /><br />NevineNevine Sultanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08794887684860140819noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-61698406757622083432010-02-25T08:27:02.116-05:002010-02-25T08:27:02.116-05:00I think you'll a darn good short story on your...I think you'll a darn good short story on your hands to publish once you've completed the series. The sci-fi department has been dying these days. Eagerly waiting for the next parts.Aniket Thakkarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18311954967682696734noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-62180619425418500142010-02-24T22:06:33.329-05:002010-02-24T22:06:33.329-05:00Walking Man, that's probably the greatest thin...Walking Man, that's probably the greatest thing that I could hear. That you're beginning to look forward to more of the story.<br /><br />Karen, there's a good bit more. :)<br /><br />Bernita, I'm having a lot of fun setting this one up!<br /><br />Vesper, this short story is probably my most intricate plotwise.<br /><br />Mona, I'm also having fun pouring on the science!<br /><br />Four Dinner, a SEED-hugger, eh? We'll have to see what I have in store for these folks....Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-82497128354752136252010-02-24T19:08:06.340-05:002010-02-24T19:08:06.340-05:00I am becoming very fond of Seed.
Don't you da...I am becoming very fond of Seed.<br /><br />Don't you dare do anything horrible to him...er...it...whateverDILLIGAFhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16520650650468676361noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-43034456068297761242010-02-24T14:08:28.204-05:002010-02-24T14:08:28.204-05:00Moral of the story: Do not underestimate the power...Moral of the story: Do not underestimate the power of a seed :D<br /><br />jokes apart, The speed of story telling matches travel in space. That is real Sci - Fi!Monahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08615034229525061880noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-32718906192530794862010-02-24T12:12:50.845-05:002010-02-24T12:12:50.845-05:00Wow!
It becomes increasingly interesting! Can'...Wow!<br />It becomes increasingly interesting! Can't wait to read more.Vesperhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12417602625059442986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-41325046979232449082010-02-24T11:53:51.869-05:002010-02-24T11:53:51.869-05:00Now that's suspense!Now that's suspense!Bernitahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05264585685253812090noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-2863469917596421252010-02-24T05:44:16.734-05:002010-02-24T05:44:16.734-05:00This is really good, and I'm waiting to see if...This is really good, and I'm waiting to see if there's more.Karenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12003379181294550035noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-51509282580455133682010-02-24T05:01:51.377-05:002010-02-24T05:01:51.377-05:00The background of what is happening certainly lend...The background of what is happening certainly lends itself to the thus far known components of the story. I am becoming thrilled to see more SEED being posted, Jason.the walking manhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10058913927297370740noreply@blogger.com