tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post7884325943352078575..comments2023-09-22T07:03:03.280-04:00Comments on The Clarity of Night: Entry #222Jason Evanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14851992219298316168noreply@blogger.comBlogger22125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-82195653549306196062010-01-23T00:22:09.979-05:002010-01-23T00:22:09.979-05:00I hope she was able to keep her promise.
Congrats...I hope she was able to keep her promise.<br /><br />Congrats on the H/M<br /><br />DottieAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08688849410604429533noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-53693709676479039402010-01-19T13:49:00.575-05:002010-01-19T13:49:00.575-05:00Sweet and sad ... you pulled off the bittersweetne...Sweet and sad ... you pulled off the bittersweetness very well!Kartikhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01067636999700672077noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-3761150200033019012010-01-19T00:33:26.977-05:002010-01-19T00:33:26.977-05:00Superb finish. I can see the moment clearly. My ...Superb finish. I can see the moment clearly. My only confusion was at the beginning, when I thought Molly was a little girl pulling her hat down over her ears. It wasn't until the wheelchair that I fully realized she was grown up.PJDhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05028687955957107957noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-90429528203225916982010-01-18T13:41:26.326-05:002010-01-18T13:41:26.326-05:00what a sweet, sad vignette.what a sweet, sad vignette.Rachel Greenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13048590167153841615noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-65622017537550798432010-01-18T13:31:38.352-05:002010-01-18T13:31:38.352-05:00Very moving story, but like othes I'm confused...Very moving story, but like othes I'm confused by Amy and Molly?TLhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01613912638668399684noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-903697105514175792010-01-18T01:50:59.487-05:002010-01-18T01:50:59.487-05:00A real whirlwind of emotions here.A real whirlwind of emotions here.Craighttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04344917148662934359noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-61737536707546974442010-01-17T17:26:44.845-05:002010-01-17T17:26:44.845-05:00Bittersweet and movingly told but like Aerin I was...Bittersweet and movingly told but like Aerin I was a tad confused as Molly and Amy seemed to be the same person. But the details and descriptions were gorgeous and the final line was beautiful.JaneyVhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04951739945670483199noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-53691971197713462642010-01-17T08:37:28.667-05:002010-01-17T08:37:28.667-05:00Your opening was very strong. Nice job.Your opening was very strong. Nice job.Bethhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13860024042221101257noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-39645106692017611602010-01-16T11:24:44.451-05:002010-01-16T11:24:44.451-05:00Very touching.
I was a little confused as to who ...Very touching.<br /><br />I was a little confused as to who was Amy and who was Molly. Were they they one in the same?Deb Smythenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-35207602623269562572010-01-16T07:26:07.171-05:002010-01-16T07:26:07.171-05:00This has a Victorian feel to it. I would've li...This has a Victorian feel to it. I would've liked more detail regarding the wheelchaired character, what led to it.James R. Tomlinsonnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-65604257235147040442010-01-16T07:17:27.669-05:002010-01-16T07:17:27.669-05:00Oh Good God.
That was so beautiful. I can't s...Oh Good God.<br /><br />That was so beautiful. I can't say more.Preetihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00279859240371070699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-87804709598623767582010-01-16T01:04:53.580-05:002010-01-16T01:04:53.580-05:00Yes, this was very very touching. Loved it!Yes, this was very very touching. Loved it!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-67087442487812170642010-01-15T22:39:30.577-05:002010-01-15T22:39:30.577-05:00Caveat
Something I Would Keep
the sweetness of the...<br><br><a href="http://www.insearchofgiants.com/2010/01/commenting-on-silhouette.html" rel="nofollow">Caveat</a><br><br /><b>Something I Would Keep</b><br><br />the sweetness of the relationship is nicely conveyed<br /><br /><b>Something I Might Tweak</b><br><br />I'm unclear as to whether there are two or three characters - Molly, Amy and John?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-91480095968211705042010-01-15T15:26:38.999-05:002010-01-15T15:26:38.999-05:00I'm officially crying.I'm officially crying.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-87004840696909909132010-01-14T20:21:07.167-05:002010-01-14T20:21:07.167-05:00annemaria, nicely done!annemaria, nicely done!laughingwolfhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08873675614347328116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-10238948859475404122010-01-14T06:21:58.818-05:002010-01-14T06:21:58.818-05:00So very touching. Untainted love.
Thank you for s...So very touching. Untainted love.<br /><br />Thank you for such a beautiful piece.Aniket Thakkarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18311954967682696734noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-34488120366083664822010-01-14T02:48:24.549-05:002010-01-14T02:48:24.549-05:00Very moving.Very moving.McKoalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01457446171624585099noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-58904489046287404582010-01-13T23:34:09.444-05:002010-01-13T23:34:09.444-05:00That last line really had something :)
Beautiful ...That last line really had something :)<br /><br />Beautiful feeling of Love and Hope.<br /><br />All the best :)<br /><br />Cheers<br />MaheshMahesh Sindbandgehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17099095274767291078noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-38133701767992940252010-01-13T22:15:24.419-05:002010-01-13T22:15:24.419-05:00Sad, but honest.
Jean AnnSad, but honest. <br /><br />Jean AnnJean Ann Williamsnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-78802879052106010832010-01-13T21:42:27.238-05:002010-01-13T21:42:27.238-05:00So so so so sad!So so so so sad!Laurelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06120847492230531939noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-12855258772055834612010-01-13T21:27:02.316-05:002010-01-13T21:27:02.316-05:00Oh, sweet...honest and sincere.Oh, sweet...honest and sincere.Bernitahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05264585685253812090noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-88734956187194983572010-01-13T21:10:29.584-05:002010-01-13T21:10:29.584-05:00beautiful.beautiful.Jeanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02099808690177823190noreply@blogger.com