tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post7976848083544893245..comments2023-09-22T07:03:03.280-04:00Comments on The Clarity of Night: Forties Club Finalist #66Jason Evanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14851992219298316168noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-71244030348695155752010-08-02T10:57:10.940-04:002010-08-02T10:57:10.940-04:00It's so crisp and effective. Just in 4 paras I...It's so crisp and effective. Just in 4 paras I went through the journey from being a commercial God to a purist Jweller.Nomadhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06852389420922223236noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-29214749373680360112010-08-02T08:05:24.846-04:002010-08-02T08:05:24.846-04:00Really enjoyed this voice. Very very dark and cre...Really enjoyed this voice. Very very dark and creepy.Catherine Viberthttp://www.catvibe.net/blognoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-49570402909433460172010-07-30T23:00:30.888-04:002010-07-30T23:00:30.888-04:00I liked the concept of gems as living things. Thi...I liked the concept of gems as living things. This is told with a great voice.AidanFhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09876041003278004627noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-35586159801170766062010-07-30T12:26:34.102-04:002010-07-30T12:26:34.102-04:00Turn, turn, turn. Shine. It’s nothing but a stone ...Turn, turn, turn. Shine. It’s nothing but a stone now.<br /><br /><br />You make it interesting, like always. And also, co incidentally, I dealt with stones today :)<br /><br /><br />Me likes.For Change and Alter Egoshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16205758228964489000noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-3346934036931701382010-07-30T09:56:37.321-04:002010-07-30T09:56:37.321-04:00A glimpse into the mind of the devil?A glimpse into the mind of the devil?Deb Smythehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10990130480508998598noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-55641388924843555512010-07-29T10:30:03.149-04:002010-07-29T10:30:03.149-04:00Laurel said just what I was thinking -again!
I ...Laurel said just what I was thinking -<i>again</i>! <br /><br />I think that there's a beautiful poetry in these words. Even though at times the mysticism made me feel like I was on some psychedelic trip, I thoroughly enjoyed the ride!JaneyVhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04951739945670483199noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-58818464624466827842010-07-29T05:17:01.841-04:002010-07-29T05:17:01.841-04:00This character is definitely "God-Like."...This character is definitely "God-Like." With each imperative sentence, his commands turn from stone to "you." Intereting interpretation.JR's Thumbprintshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10479324326541901987noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-88490155228167962002010-07-28T23:25:00.031-04:002010-07-28T23:25:00.031-04:00Wow!I liked that last line
"Forget your usele...Wow!I liked that last line<br />"Forget your useless jewels now; wear a soul..." very nice thought!Great piece...Erratic Thoughtshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14852558150033296079noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-15888187593384608242010-07-28T22:40:41.517-04:002010-07-28T22:40:41.517-04:00Wow. There are a lot of layers here. I like the sp...Wow. There are a lot of layers here. I like the spiritual tone combined with the sinister. I can't quite decide if the POV is a god or a psychopath.Laurelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06120847492230531939noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-31996848778741769242010-07-28T21:10:02.851-04:002010-07-28T21:10:02.851-04:00Hi Mithun
A jeweler?? but maybe he doesn't on...Hi Mithun<br /><br />A jeweler?? but maybe he doesn't only deal in the gems found within the Earth... or maybe, his gems are living, breathing beings, only to become stones, precious... or not.<br /><br />Nice use of the prompt. Loved the last line.<br /><br />Dottie :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08688849410604429533noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-2501337821149759382010-07-28T21:03:03.055-04:002010-07-28T21:03:03.055-04:00Yikes, grim.Yikes, grim.PJDhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05028687955957107957noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-30573031287955980962010-07-28T19:08:54.102-04:002010-07-28T19:08:54.102-04:00Loved the depth in this one. :)Loved the depth in this one. :)Oddyoddyo13https://www.blogger.com/profile/05557994037779209704noreply@blogger.com