tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post8311797970551423207..comments2023-09-22T07:03:03.280-04:00Comments on The Clarity of Night: Entry #35Jason Evanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14851992219298316168noreply@blogger.comBlogger21125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-21013515509279251532007-05-01T09:30:00.000-04:002007-05-01T09:30:00.000-04:00Thanks again, everyone.Thanks again, everyone.Sean Ferrellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01233391827095815940noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-28756755200025392092007-04-30T21:54:00.000-04:002007-04-30T21:54:00.000-04:00Quite a sweeping story packed in here. The final ...Quite a sweeping story packed in here. The final paragraph was nothing short of beautiful.<BR/><BR/>Not sure if I agree about expanding this. Short pieces are just as much about what is not said as what is said. The mystery here is deliciously thick.<BR/><BR/>High marks overall.<BR/><BR/>Congratulations on 2nd Place!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-62401542992895325202007-04-30T07:47:00.000-04:002007-04-30T07:47:00.000-04:00talk about finding a positive way to use up anger ...talk about finding a positive way to use up anger and frustration!AngelConradiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09423318903817661244noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-12906504970544243422007-04-30T03:46:00.000-04:002007-04-30T03:46:00.000-04:00EDIT: Congratulations on your win, Mr. Ferrel!Oh t...EDIT: Congratulations on your win, Mr. Ferrel!<BR/><BR/>Oh this one is cool because it leaves a person wanting more. There are questions to be answered. I would like to see this story continued.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-64152372616272626252007-04-29T21:26:00.000-04:002007-04-29T21:26:00.000-04:00Sean, I commented earlier but wanted to come back ...Sean, I commented earlier but wanted to come back in and congratulate you.Esther Avilahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06840416881970211377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-53791131188359421822007-04-28T15:03:00.000-04:002007-04-28T15:03:00.000-04:00This story presents so many opportunies for expans...This story presents so many opportunies for expansion. It would be interesting to see it developed further.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-33400342936620178612007-04-28T00:59:00.000-04:002007-04-28T00:59:00.000-04:00This comment has been removed by the author.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-9351608615479482612007-04-27T21:13:00.000-04:002007-04-27T21:13:00.000-04:00Thanks to everyone for their nice comments. It's b...Thanks to everyone for their nice comments. It's been a long, long time since I shared work in a forum where I'd get feedback. It's wonderful to have such positive response to my work. Thank you all, you've made my first entry into one of Jason's contests a rewarding experience.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-87439558886746531432007-04-27T10:10:00.000-04:002007-04-27T10:10:00.000-04:00Wow, this is beautiful.Wow, this is beautiful.bekbekhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17935766604154823539noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-8361189827117209012007-04-27T09:25:00.000-04:002007-04-27T09:25:00.000-04:00i think this is beautiful.i think this is beautiful.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-34034387119857547322007-04-27T00:47:00.000-04:002007-04-27T00:47:00.000-04:00Odd, original, intense. They're all right. I don't...Odd, original, intense. They're all right. I don't think I've ever seen flash fiction succeed at this particular type of modern fantasy before. It is very difficult to do even with no word limit. And I add my vote to those who think you should develop this story and this character.The Wandering Authorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05404559867270050616noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-67953673634608818982007-04-26T21:58:00.000-04:002007-04-26T21:58:00.000-04:00i can see this as a movie too. "Mother's love was ...i can see this as a movie too. <BR/><BR/>"Mother's love was just shy of brutal, and Father's brutality was a notch above profound" --> intenseEsther Avilahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06840416881970211377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-36498946691562718032007-04-26T13:06:00.000-04:002007-04-26T13:06:00.000-04:00Original indeed. When is the movie coming out?Original indeed. When is the movie coming out?Terrihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03158421102740382411noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-49064730927203519362007-04-25T13:42:00.000-04:002007-04-25T13:42:00.000-04:00Yep, like the others I would love to read more. Th...Yep, like the others I would love to read more. This has really grabbed my interest. Well done Sean.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08533913253403252799noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-32677692432607489122007-04-25T12:13:00.000-04:002007-04-25T12:13:00.000-04:00Loving the premise of this. Gets my synapses spark...Loving the premise of this. Gets my synapses sparking.Jonihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18109855683749612076noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-92027076275560301742007-04-25T11:22:00.000-04:002007-04-25T11:22:00.000-04:00Do continue!Do continue!Bernitahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05264585685253812090noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-87466137876135976772007-04-25T11:06:00.000-04:002007-04-25T11:06:00.000-04:00Very interesting take on this picture. You all am...Very interesting take on this picture. You all amaze me!Bethhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17335415338155220244noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-74328775063711417072007-04-25T09:17:00.000-04:002007-04-25T09:17:00.000-04:00A unique take on the theme. I'm intrigued by this ...A unique take on the theme. I'm intrigued by this and hope you plan on expanding it. Nicely done.Jaye Wellshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09407478042834459126noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-56377118322654966382007-04-25T08:36:00.000-04:002007-04-25T08:36:00.000-04:00I LOVE this. It satisfies me in its brevity, and a...I LOVE this. It satisfies me in its brevity, and at the same time, it could be the beginning of a novel.<BR/><BR/>Very well done!billiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18187141867284800597noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-25489728828569651092007-04-25T07:56:00.000-04:002007-04-25T07:56:00.000-04:00Really liked this. You have managed to squeeze the...Really liked this. You have managed to squeeze the whole promise of a book into 250 words.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03665385782194826703noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-57629540633572155782007-04-25T07:05:00.000-04:002007-04-25T07:05:00.000-04:00Bonus points for originality, Sean. Very intrigui...Bonus points for originality, Sean. Very intriguing.Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13323167263283798566noreply@blogger.com