tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post8555120937012731763..comments2023-09-22T07:03:03.280-04:00Comments on The Clarity of Night: Entry #17Jason Evanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14851992219298316168noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-9361183719385998662011-07-28T21:14:27.382-04:002011-07-28T21:14:27.382-04:00A slice of life vignette in witchcraft. Solid dia...A slice of life vignette in witchcraft. Solid dialogue. Well done, especially in pacing and storytelling!<br /><br />Congrats on Forties Club!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-29953228602499867152011-07-23T04:41:21.867-04:002011-07-23T04:41:21.867-04:00Rita - i love your easy-feeling, naturalistic dial...Rita - i love your easy-feeling, naturalistic dialogue. You managed to convey the Miranda's personality and that of her patient teacher in a gentle and totally unforced way. I admire that skill.JaneyVhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04951739945670483199noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-11363433974360336192011-07-22T23:01:48.999-04:002011-07-22T23:01:48.999-04:00I guess for some young conjurers of magic, graspin...I guess for some young conjurers of magic, grasping hand gestures is the same as young mortals grappling with mathematical word problems. This sounds like you had a lot of fun writing it.Linda Ryan-Harperhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15164148666810818891noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-19687307478651941262011-07-21T10:12:21.873-04:002011-07-21T10:12:21.873-04:00I love the idea of magical instruction as somethin...I love the idea of magical instruction as something between intimate friends. This works.Chris Alliniottehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04094925215735680849noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-52343633799405048842011-07-20T01:15:29.918-04:002011-07-20T01:15:29.918-04:00magical..
loved it!magical..<br /><br />loved it!yaminihttp://expressmyway.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-435253978219445452011-07-19T23:20:12.114-04:002011-07-19T23:20:12.114-04:00I thought this was a fun post, and the dialogue wa...I thought this was a fun post, and the dialogue was sharp!Richard Levangiehttp://richardlevangie.com/blog/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-38200847214906827072011-07-19T14:59:28.582-04:002011-07-19T14:59:28.582-04:00Fun dialogue! ~Jana A.Fun dialogue! ~Jana A.bluesugarpoethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14775769108087898456noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-24696765969863520112011-07-18T19:06:59.030-04:002011-07-18T19:06:59.030-04:00Magical!! take care
xMagical!! take care<br />xOld Kittyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13185547869183611159noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-58021753240964993102011-07-18T10:28:18.588-04:002011-07-18T10:28:18.588-04:00Spell conjuring, a hazardous profession. Nice!
Do...Spell conjuring, a hazardous profession. Nice!<br /><br />Dottie :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08688849410604429533noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-58622492631238816382011-07-18T06:53:26.696-04:002011-07-18T06:53:26.696-04:00Wow, thank you all for the kind words. I am blush...Wow, thank you all for the kind words. I am blushing. I loved writing this story, though sometimes I don't know where the words come from. <br /><br />RitaMy crazy lifehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05631522969768435267noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-50357380240189301272011-07-17T02:46:45.498-04:002011-07-17T02:46:45.498-04:00I feel like I'd like to read the larger story ...I feel like I'd like to read the larger story that this could be part of!fairyhedgehoghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14141089706966852951noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-73079992189595943922011-07-16T23:07:36.842-04:002011-07-16T23:07:36.842-04:00They make a delightful pair, don't they? Pleas...They make a delightful pair, don't they? Pleasant and amusing, this bit.PJDhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05028687955957107957noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-27911885248324244922011-07-16T11:53:29.959-04:002011-07-16T11:53:29.959-04:00I really loved the dialogues here. They provided e...I really loved the dialogues here. They provided effortless reading. I never realized when I reached the end of it. <br /><br />Thanks for sharing.Aniket Thakkarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18311954967682696734noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-83821636729856887672011-07-15T02:47:51.741-04:002011-07-15T02:47:51.741-04:00ah, the early spell weaving missteps. I think it w...ah, the early spell weaving missteps. I think it was Anne of Green Gables and Mildred Hubble that made me fall in love with clumsy, hapless heroines!Jade L Blackwaterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15321787298101881675noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-9662995730321451032011-07-14T23:25:12.809-04:002011-07-14T23:25:12.809-04:00Your metaphorical use of hands is intriguing. In a...Your metaphorical use of hands is intriguing. In a magician's world, symbolism plays such an important part. I get the feeling that Miranda has learned more than just hand usage; perhaps she's discovered a piece of herself as well. I really enjoyed the dialogue here; it made clear the close relationship between teacher and student.<br /><br />Thank you for sharing!Michele Zugnonihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12394802719932859470noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1732532757190814022011-07-14T21:51:51.114-04:002011-07-14T21:51:51.114-04:00Ah ... I talk with my hands, too. It's hard no...Ah ... I talk with my hands, too. It's hard not to! That's going to be a tough one for her to not do. :)Aimee Lainehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15201246474625590886noreply@blogger.com