tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post9052790146777644452..comments2023-09-22T07:03:03.280-04:00Comments on The Clarity of Night: Entry #55Jason Evanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14851992219298316168noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-8176443217625933332008-03-06T18:10:00.000-05:002008-03-06T18:10:00.000-05:00Yikes-- another whispering tree! I've learned one...Yikes-- another whispering tree! I've learned one thing from this contest: if I ever hear a tree whispering, I will run... as fast as I can!<BR/><BR/>You set up a compelling mystery. I want to know more.Ainehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08402176500997528105noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-66708754869871033782008-03-04T16:41:00.000-05:002008-03-04T16:41:00.000-05:00I liked this. Good vision. The story behind the ...I liked this. Good vision. The story behind the narrative voice intrigues me.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-54743639358129082822008-03-01T22:33:00.000-05:002008-03-01T22:33:00.000-05:00"I'm just an ordinary person, average" - a nice li..."I'm just an ordinary person, average" - a nice little irony intertwined in this piece. Haunting indeed!bluesugarpoethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14775769108087898456noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-7124242593426979522008-02-29T02:34:00.000-05:002008-02-29T02:34:00.000-05:00A haunting and thought provoking piece of writing....A haunting and thought provoking piece of writing. Excellent use of the whispers theme.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04871239587214383387noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-35179035299761455592008-02-28T20:32:00.000-05:002008-02-28T20:32:00.000-05:00i wonder how many of us would NOT sell our soul......i wonder how many of us would NOT sell our soul.....paisleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08231453820728399262noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-84664412894715182642008-02-28T07:24:00.000-05:002008-02-28T07:24:00.000-05:00Creepy indeed, and I too, like the use of the fire...Creepy indeed, and I too, like the use of the fire-related saying here.SzélsőFahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11600289147447182465noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-89067930208589467392008-02-27T16:43:00.000-05:002008-02-27T16:43:00.000-05:00Ah, the voices in my head! I toyed with that, too...Ah, the voices in my head! I toyed with that, too, but you did it far more justice than I could have. I love phrase "wouldn't set the world on fire" and it dual meanings. Thanks!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-4503341219554953202008-02-27T15:21:00.000-05:002008-02-27T15:21:00.000-05:00I really like that you left a lot to our imaginati...I really like that you left a lot to our imaginations here. This is a nicely creepy piece of fiction.<BR/><BR/><BR/>Good work! :)Sarah Hinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13888406261817690010noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-3689031293925286992008-02-27T10:11:00.000-05:002008-02-27T10:11:00.000-05:00I also like the use of "whispers" and tree togethe...I also like the use of "whispers" and tree together.Bethhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17335415338155220244noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-91842960483662108992008-02-27T09:52:00.000-05:002008-02-27T09:52:00.000-05:00Wonderful use of the "whispers" theme. I like all...Wonderful use of the "whispers" theme. I like all the possibilities of this piece!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com