tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post9122784584218444220..comments2023-09-22T07:03:03.280-04:00Comments on The Clarity of Night: Entry #45Jason Evanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14851992219298316168noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-56423065131428420162007-08-07T21:51:00.000-04:002007-08-07T21:51:00.000-04:00The ending image really sticks with you. The setu...The ending image really sticks with you. The setup also was a strong hook. Well written.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-26942441924036085892007-08-07T09:17:00.000-04:002007-08-07T09:17:00.000-04:00Schprockie, you always leave me wondering - and yo...Schprockie, you always leave me wondering - and you know how much I hate that! ;-)Kathleenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04399098868122212536noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-23480340310190731632007-08-05T18:42:00.000-04:002007-08-05T18:42:00.000-04:00I too really like the open ending leaving it to ou...I too really like the open ending leaving it to our imagination. At the same time I am asking myself, and? and what happens next? Nice work schprok.<BR/><BR/>BDbriliantdonkeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05159881776835603748noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-64496222875714574012007-08-05T07:51:00.000-04:002007-08-05T07:51:00.000-04:00An enjoyable sketch.You built him up nicely and br...An enjoyable sketch.<BR/>You built him up nicely and brought in the idea that the happy-go-lucky backpackers were not gormless at just the right time.Bernitahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05264585685253812090noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-58880185608847687332007-08-03T09:59:00.000-04:002007-08-03T09:59:00.000-04:00Nice. Just enough left unsaid.Nice. Just enough left unsaid.Khon Laohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13875982601155520479noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-49340510977037656952007-08-02T13:42:00.000-04:002007-08-02T13:42:00.000-04:00Fantastic - well-paced and mysterious!Fantastic - well-paced and mysterious!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-58066839686894274642007-08-01T11:40:00.000-04:002007-08-01T11:40:00.000-04:00who gets killed, get anyone killed at all? Besides...who gets killed, get anyone killed at all? Besides, very enjoyable read.<BR/>Mr Schprock never fails to entertain the readers.SzélsőFahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11600289147447182465noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-86591692331241684242007-08-01T03:36:00.000-04:002007-08-01T03:36:00.000-04:00Very nicely written - good flow and a disturbing t...Very nicely written - good flow and a disturbing tale. Well done!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04871239587214383387noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-65172396973640947952007-07-31T20:38:00.000-04:002007-07-31T20:38:00.000-04:00Good narrative flow. I also like the use of a myst...Good narrative flow. I also like the use of a mysterious ending. Well done.Jeffhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06106410070220667314noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-87840323195244683072007-07-31T14:56:00.000-04:002007-07-31T14:56:00.000-04:00Such a dark side for you, Schprock. This is the o...Such a dark side for you, Schprock. This is the only time when I see that side (during these contests). I really liked this one. Liked the flow of it and even though you know things are going bad, once you read about the feather, it's like, "Damn."Bethhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17335415338155220244noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-51730184395054269402007-07-31T13:46:00.000-04:002007-07-31T13:46:00.000-04:00yes. all the above. and a sense of humor. it had ...yes. all the above. and a sense of humor. it had a humorous side as well.Kelleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15896519648818458407noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-51651409296158876512007-07-31T13:19:00.000-04:002007-07-31T13:19:00.000-04:00I enjoed the open ending, lets the readers use the...I enjoed the open ending, lets the readers use their imagination on what happened.wrath999https://www.blogger.com/profile/10964105112015979524noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-7586027148720691612007-07-31T10:13:00.000-04:002007-07-31T10:13:00.000-04:00this is simply fantastic!this is simply fantastic!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-58128981980310665932007-07-31T09:23:00.000-04:002007-07-31T09:23:00.000-04:00Turnabout's foul play?Brilliantly written.Turnabout's foul play?<BR/><BR/>Brilliantly written.Hoodiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17616427797201977083noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-22757008702941555202007-07-31T07:24:00.000-04:002007-07-31T07:24:00.000-04:00The lady or the tiger? Intriguing story, I'd like ...The lady or the tiger? Intriguing story, I'd like to see how it endsAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-35468915539170945842007-07-31T05:12:00.000-04:002007-07-31T05:12:00.000-04:00The writing flowed and what a mystery. Were they k...The writing flowed and what a mystery. Were they killed? Nicely done.Judehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14121286194338647357noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-61301843990610863852007-07-31T00:23:00.000-04:002007-07-31T00:23:00.000-04:00I love your easy writing style--or at least how ea...I love your easy writing style--or at least how easy you make it appear. You're also a tease with that ending, which makes the tale even more intriguing. Well done.Jaye Wellshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09407478042834459126noreply@blogger.com