Friday, July 30, 2010

"The Draftsman" and "Anniversary Gift"

Please give a warm round of applause for our debut novelist and co-host Stephen Parrish!

*clapping surges and holds steady*

Excellent! He really does deserve our congratulations. And now, Stephen has cracked his knuckles and whipped out TWO interpretations of the "Uncovered" photo. You go man! And without further ado...



The Draftsman
by Stephen Parrish


Dinner was almost ready, so she peeked into his shop. He was leaning over the work bench, as usual. Toying with compass and protractor. Doodling. She leaned over his shoulder and saw geometric figures he had sketched, objects with faces, edges, and terminating points.

"Designing Christmas ornaments?" she asked.

"They're crystals. Inorganic compounds whose molecules stack in patterns."

"And each one is unique?"

"No, not this time. Not like living things. Crystals dogmatically follow the same thirty-two forms."

She studied his notes and diagrams. The objects varied in color as well as symmetry. They were alluring, they attracted attention. People would covet them.

"You realize," she said, "this constitutes evidence. Alligators and butterflies appear on Earth, but nowhere else. These things," she tapped the drawing, "show up anywhere in the cosmos where there are sufficient inorganic compounds, opportunity for them to get together, and room for a matrix to grow."

He nodded. "That's the idea."

"Think they'll figure it out?"

"One of them will."

She kissed him on the cheek. "Hungry? I've got blueberry pie for desert."

"Blueberries?" He straightened up and glanced across the workbench. "Have I drafted blueberries?"

"If not, you'd better hurry. Dinner's in ten."

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Anniversary Gift
by Stephen Parrish


"And she won't know the difference?" Mr. Wallace looked up at my father with soft, trusting eyes.

"She won't have a clue."

My father was right, it took experience. In the case of cubic zirconia, you looked for small orange flashes in the stone. He showed Mr. Wallace a two carat ring. Big enough to impress his wife, but not so big that she'd be suspicious. We would need a day to size it.

Mr. Wallace held the ring up to the light. "What if she has it appraised?"

"Oh, come now, Peter, when has Maria ever had one of your gifts appraised?"

The next day I came by after school in time to see Mr. Wallace pick up the ring. Again the moist eyes, the trusting look. The eyebrows raised hopefully.

"If you can't tell," my father assured him, "neither can she."

After Mr. Wallace shuffled out my father said, "It's sad his grocery store is losing customers. He gave me my first job. Twenty-five years ago."

"Wish there were something we could do," I said.

"He's a proud man. He'd turn down any offer of help. Or gratitude."

Later, as we were closing the store, I noticed a loose transparent gemstone sitting on the bench.

"Shouldn't we lock that up?" I asked.

My father shook his head. "Don't bother."

I turned off the overheads and only the security lights remained on. As I walked out I looked back at the gemstone and saw a tiny orange flash.

On a Walk by the Ocean


And now for yours truly--



On a Walk by the Ocean
by Jason Evans


She lifted the water pitcher, but the cup by the hospital bed was still full.

"Are you...in pain?" she said.

The machines blinked. He didn't answer. The question finally drifted away.

She began smoothing the sheets.

"I need to tell you something," he said.

His voice was so thin.

Dying.

"You know the story of the Fates?" he said. "Greek mythology? When you're born, three women spin, measure, and cut the thread of your life. Your fate."

He was her closest friend. Her only friend.

Why didn't she ever tell him how much more she felt?

"But it's not true," he said, leaning forward. "They string necklaces."

She froze.

He nodded. "Gems, all colors and sizes. They determine everything you are."

She wiped sweat from her palms.

"I'm serious," he said.

Maybe she should go.

Intensity returned to his eyes. "I know you see them now."

He needed rest.

"Because I saw them."

Yes, go.

"Until yesterday."

His strength withered again.

Yesterday, they were walking on the beach. He stopped, so upset. He reached down, and....

"Wait!" she said, horrified.

His words, so simple. "Yours. Broke."

She never told him about her headaches. Avoiding the doctor.

Now, he had the aneurysm.

"What did you do?!" she said.

He looked so tired.

"I couldn't...."

She clutched at the strange jewels around her throat, but her fingers passed through.

His neck was bare.

She shook her head. No, no, no.

But he just smiled, almost asleep. "I gave mine. To you."

Thursday, July 29, 2010

Readers' Choice Voting ("Uncovered")

The finalists are final! 74 great stories are in the running.

Voting for the Readers' Choice Award is now open!

This portion of the contest is open to everyone who submitted an entry and received a Night Owl Number. Here are the rules:

  1. Contest participants are invited to vote for their top 5 favorite entries by emailing their votes to jevanswriter at yahoo dot com.
  2. Please vote by finalist number and list your votes from 1 to 5 with 1 being your top vote.
  3. I will award 5 points for your 1st vote, 4 points for your 2nd vote, 3 points for your 3rd, 2 points for your 4th, and 1 point for your 5th. If you submit fewer than 5 votes, I'll award the least number of votes possible for each choice (for example, if you vote for only 2 entries, I'll award 2 and 1 points, respectively).
  4. You may not vote for your own entry. Please specify your Night Owl Number at the beginning of your email.
  5. At the close of Readers' Choice Award voting, I will tally the points. The winner will be the entry with the most points.
  6. I reserve the right to award additional Readers' Choice Awards with or without prizes.

As you read, please keep the comments coming. Feedback and appreciation is the fuel along the lonely road of writing. If you find folks whose writing moves you, please visit their blogs or ask where you can find more. Enjoy your own judging, and above all, have fun!

Cast your votes before Monday, August 2nd, at 8:00 p.m. Eastern Time (U.S.). At that time, I will let you know when the winners will be announced.

AND THERE'S MORE!!

Check back tomorrow, when Stephen Parrish and I will take a crack at the "Uncovered" photo.

Wednesday, July 28, 2010

'Uncovered" Short Fiction Contest (featuring Stephen Parrish)



**THE ENTRY PERIOD IS CLOSED**

READERS' CHOICE VOTING IS NOW OPEN UNTIL
MONDAY, AUGUST 2ND at 8:00 P.M. (Eastern Time, U.S.)


Click HERE for Contest Rules and Announcement

Check TWITTER for Contest Updates and Information


Forties Club Finalists
Aerin Rose, Heirloom (#72)
Angela A, Waiting (#40)
Ansari, Sameera, Today (#56)
Argyle, Michelle Davidson, Silent (#52)
Bea, Kimberly, Toads And Diamonds (#33)
Blackwater, Jade Leone, For Laure-Alda, from Francis (#22)
Carlucci, John Donald, Honor Amongst Thieves (#35)
Cormier, Sandra, Sparklies (#34)
Cox, Elliott, Grandpa’s Laugh (#42)
Davidson, Peter, Locked Away (#32)
Dhanke, Prashant, Unborn (#25)
Dickson, Donna, Eau de Fear (#41)
Dudley, Peter, Smoldering (#17)
Eaton, Loren, Chthonic (#4)
Ellie, Among the Weeds (#10)
Faulk, LynnCee, The Fairy's Gift (#38)
Fox, Gef, The Waiting Game (#67)
Fritz, Aidan, Tavernier Dimensions (#45)
Grace, February, Wish Trip (#63)
Green, Lisa Gail, Eureka (#21)
Green, Rachel, Family Jewels (#20)
Hamilton, Matthew A., Home Early (#14)
Harar, Beth, Siren (#16)
Haws, Joni, Anniversary Dinner (#62)
Hendricks, Rebecca, Shine (#73)
Hickman, Andrea, Disappointment (#59)
Hill, Stephen, Bigfoot and Wild Boy (#74)
JaneyV, Ryanstones (#69)
Johnson, Grey, The Sky Rained Shoes (#7)
Jones, Lissy, Three Lives (#46)
Jones, Samuel I., Haina Baraka (#68)
Kale, Vincent, Beloved (#61)
Kovaks, Lazlo, Desert Treasure (#48)
Laine, Aimee, Life’s Treasure (#3)
Langridge, Gina, Treasures (#58)
Lapham, Bill, With Nonchalant Flair (#8)
Larson, C. Sonberg, Adorn (#51)
Lena, Goodbye (#13)
Lortz, Kelley, Killing Time (#5)
Mansfield, Rebecca, The Jewels of Life (#18)
McMurry, Michelle, The Caged Bird (#60)
Morgan, J. Elis, Synesthesia (#28)
Morse, Michael, Useless (#11)
Mukherjee, Mithun, The Maker (#66)
Nagel, B., Fifths (#44)
Peters, Lewis J., Death Row (#65)
Pino, Ann M., Like Broken Glass (#36)
Posol’stvo, Easy Chair (#29)
Precie, Child’s Play (#12)
Price, Darryl, Finalist #23
Remp, Timothy P., The Maker (#39)
Riddle, T.M., Early Riser (#27)
Robertshaw, Hilary, The Search (#55)
Rowlands, John, Friendship (#15)
Scott, Craig, Fairytale Endings (#2)
Seiffertt, Kiki, Family Jewels (#1)
Sharma, Mayur, The Amethyst (#70)
Smythe, Deborah, Broken Shores (#19)
Snowden, Shona, Value (#43)
Stevens, Hadley, Past Transgressions (#49)
Sullivan, Meghan, Seaside Promises (#71)
Tanay, Karla, Four Brothers (#6)
Taylor, Dottie, The Vacation of a Lifetime (#54)
Tomlinson, James R., Stratagems: Polonium-210 (#57)
Tomlinson, Katherine, Finders Keepers (#30)
Tricia S., The Cold Hard Truth (#64)
Vibert, Catherine, Uncovered Again (#24)
Villarreal, Lori, The Jock (#37)
Vogt, Josh, The Care and Feeding of Angels (#9)
Wilson, Aaron M., The Wish (#31)
Whirlochre, The Skullmash Mountains Open (#53)
Whittle, Margaret D., Jewels of Pain (#26)
Wuff Al, Uncovered (#47)
Zapata, Angel, Diamond in the Rough (#50)




Forties Club Finalist #74

Bigfoot and Wild Boy
by Stephen Hill


Already splintered by treetops, the last of the sunshine vanished behind a funnel cloud. It didn’t matter. Lenny could still see, and for a moment he forgot the sweat rolling like gravy down his back, and the sputtering whine of mosquitoes in his ears.

Cloaked in shadows and seen from behind, Bigfoot looked just as Lenny had always pictured — fighting the river’s rapids with brute strength, his back sprouting hair as thick as the living room carpet. Rapids broke across his waist, foaming and spitting, enraged they couldn’t drag him down.

This is the shot, Lenny thought, clutching his camera. This is perfect.

“The locals say Bigfoot has wandered the woods around here for years,” Uncle Reg had said one night, the dark jewels of his eyes glittering with customary contempt. “I tell you what Lenny — if I ever saw one shred of real evidence, I’d blow the cat.”

In the midst of all the terrible things Uncle Reg was, he was a man of his word, and Mr. Tinkles was an old tom that drew blood just for stepping in his path. The damage dished out from someone licking his balls, thought Lenny, had to be epic.

Lenny’s camera flash blazed, and Bigfoot slipped and stumbled, twisting its neck until his eyes found Lenny’s.

Even in the shadow, Lenny recognized a familiar contemptuous glitter before the current hurled the beast into the water, his fishing pole into the air, and rolled Uncle Reg downstream and out of sight.

Forties Club Finalist #73

Shine
by Rebecca Hendricks


Aunt Geri wasn’t actually related to us. She had a place north of the city, and I’d get shipped off there in the summer. We made apple butter, which was mostly apple, and peanut butter, which somehow involved margarine. She made me go to church, which I hated. She made me do chores. She was practical. She had a tractor. And two of her fingers were missing, cut off at the knuckle.

I stopped going. Years went by. Then she died, and my cousins and I went to the funeral, and they played her favorite song. Onward Christian soldier, marching off to war…

Later, an envelope arrived in the mail, with a note from Jane. Jane was Aunt Geri’s old friend and roommate. Jane had been Aunt Geri’s student when they were younger. Jane had been something more, also.

The note said, “Geri would want you to have these things.” The little jewelry pieces glittered in the folded paper. We each picked something. I held mine pressed into my palm and cried.

So now I’m here, standing naked in the doorway, looking at you in all your glory leaning against the scratched-up kitchen counter. The place still smells like sex, tinged with licorice from our slow shots of ice-cold ouzo, celebrating our… everything. Opa! And I hold out Aunt Geri’s slender gold ring with the single gem that is, I’d discovered, a diamond. I ask if you will marry me.

Surprised, you grin. Your eyes sparkle. And you say yes.

Forties Club Finalist #72

Heirloom
by Aerin Rose


“Audrey.”

“No, it’s me, Kate.” She pulled the lavender nightgown over the old woman’s head.

“You’re leaving.”

“Yes, remember? That I’m going back to college?”

“What about my violets?”

“Don’t you worry, I wrote everything down. I marked the watering can at just the right amount.”

“The garden?”

“A walk in the gardens at 2PM, the new girl knows that, too.”

“The blinds?”

“Yes, I’ll tell her to close the blinds at bedtime.”

“Audrey. The necklace.”

“No, ma’am, I’m Kate.” She ran a brush gently through the sparse hair. “Which necklace?”

“I wore white to the ball, of course. Debutantes. Virginal my ass. But to Casino Night, I wore emerald silk, cut low. I had the bosoms for it then. A dyed ostrich feather in my hair. Daddy wanted a deal with the Carruthers. Bought me a 23 carat green tourmaline surrounded with diamonds. Believe you me, Jack Carruthers noticed. I’m pretty sure your mother was conceived that night. She had Jack’s eyes.”

Kate said quietly, “I’m not Audrey.”

“Your mother burns through money like marijuana.”

“She’s not my—What’s this?” Kate frowned at the little envelope that the older woman pushed into her hand.

“The key. For the safe deposit box. I put the necklace away, oh, years ago. Figure it’s worth ninety, a hundred thousand.”

“Mrs. Carruthers, I’m not…”

“She stuck me in this nursing home. Where they don’t even serve Rocky Road. Sell the necklace, dear. To pay for school.”

Forties Club Finalist #71

Seaside Promises
by Meghan Sullivan


“You promised me diamonds.”

“Be quiet.” The earl scooped up the kelp-laced sand, the coarse flecks sliding between his fingers.

“You said I’d be rich.”

“I said be quiet, you fool!”

Culver’s glower was visible even in the thickening fog. He was hunch-backed and stupid, but he understood avarice.

“Ain’t no diamonds, is there? Jus’ these worthless jewels she’s wearin’. That ain’t no proper reward for a bloke like me. Why we ‘ave to kill ‘er, anyway?”

Because some secrets are more precious than diamonds, The earl thought as they covered the broken body with sand. He had promised her diamonds, too. She had been such an innocent beauty, and he had promised her diamonds and sapphires and rubies if she would agree to keep his secrets. She had tried to flee instead.

“We could ‘ave at least used shovels like proper criminals,” the coachman complained as he threw another armful of sand over the body. “I know it ‘appened sorta fast and all, but this ‘ere is ‘ard work.”

“I promise you that when we are through you shall get all that you deserve.”

“You promised me diamonds.”

“Diamonds and sapphires and rubies.”

The coachmen gave a crooked smile. “You always was a good man to serve. Not the most sane or most honest, but certainly the richest.”

The earl returned the smile. Burying Culver by himself would be difficult, but the seaside estate was large, and he already knew the grave would be.

Forties Club Finalist #70

The Amethyst
by Mayur Sharma


‘A1 quality madam, best price in all of Zaveri Bazaar,’ he beamed at us.

‘Show me some colorful trinkets,’ my mother smiled politely.

‘Yes yes, of course madamji. This way,’ he pointed towards a section that seemed to contain all colors of the universe in harmony.

‘We have rose quartz, lapis lazuli, jasper, ruby, sapphire, emeralds.. ’

‘That one, can I see it?’ mother said pointing at an amethyst.

I stared blankly at the painting behind him.

Her hesitant fingers hover over the stone. Experienced eyes peer closely to determine the luster, cut and clarity.

The shopkeeper grabbed his opportunity.

‘What taste madamji. Classy. Elegant. Would look very beautiful on you.’

Mother seemed impervious to it.

‘It’s for her actually,’ she said pointing towards me.

My eyes lit up.

‘How much’, she asked quietly.

‘4600 rupees only, madamji,’ he said with a twang.

Mother gasped.

Something sunk into the bottom of my stomach. Even the jeweler began to realize.

‘You can have it for 4500, best price madamji.’

My mother smiled a grateful smile, but shook her head in the negative.

‘Too expensive.’

That’s when it struck me – the heavy downpour had turned into a drizzle outside.

The jeweler smiled a knowing smile.

‘I’m hungry. Let’s go eat somewhere - my treat!’ she continued as we started to walk out.

‘Yeah. Let’s go some where classy. Elegant. But not THAT expensive,’ I pointed backwards.

We burst into laughter.

Just another fun way to deal with incessant rains in Mumbai.

Forties Club Finalist #69

Ryanstones
by JaneyV


“Do you have any concerns or shall we just go ahead?”

“You said there’d be some discomfort. Like what? A grazed knee or breakin’ your leg?”

“Jesus Brandon you want pain? Try givin’ birth natural, like you made me do!”

“Take it easy Gems. I’m just preparin’ y’know – mentally. I saw how havin’ the kids was sore for you. I was there for all five.”

“Sore? I’ll give you fuckin’ sore? Doc, gimme a brick I’ll fix him right here!”

“Mr. Ryan it’ll be nothing like breaking your leg or, as you wife’s pointed out so … loudly … giving birth. A few anti-inflammatory painkillers are all you’ll need. And really - you will heal very quickly.”

“Hear that Brandon? You get to heal quickly. No weeks of bleedin’ through your cock for you. This’ll be a piece a cake.”

“But what if my junk don’t work so good after?”

“Sweetie, your junk ain’t nothin’ special now! But I promise you this – you get rid of your swimmers – and I will like it a whole lot more. Snip-snip or no more boom-boom.”

“OK Doc let’s do it.”

“I have all the paperwork ready to go ahead as planned on the 13th. Just one more thing; I need the details of next of kin.”

“I guess that would be me, Gemma Ruby Sapphire Ryan.”

“You’re quite the treasure Mrs. Ryan!”

“That’s right! And after next Friday, I better be the only family jewels that’s still workin’!”

Forties Club Finalist #68

Haina Baraka
by Samuel I. Jones


Kiletu Mbemba crouched on the edge of a rocky bluff. Like the gnarled acacias his black frame marked the flaxen grasslands, punctuated by huge grey rocks poking out like bones.

He stared awestruck into a large nest, at stones which threw color and light. Stones with clean, geometric shapes. Stones of incomprehensible worth.

His mind departed across alien possibilities. He could finally afford the dowry to marry Thilela. His family could buy enough food to grow fat even through the dry season; perhaps an automobile.

His heart was slow and careful as he considered, and was swiftly overwhelmed by hurdles. If he made it to the city, could he get a fair price? Would they believe a poor black villager found them in a raven’s nest? Would he be beaten or killed as a thief? They would tell him they are only glass, and then follow and murder him. Perhaps they would believe, then a company of men would come to his village, raping the women and land in search of more.

It seemed impossible this concentration of wealth could bring more joy than suffering. “Such as these,” he concluded, “would bring trouble on the head of even a white man.”

As his figure faded towards the village, goats ambling behind to his whistled tune, a large rough-plumed raven landed on the edge of the nest. Like a priest with its white-collar it laid to rest on the gemstones a white man’s identity: a passport sullied with blood.


(Samuel is an artist, programmer, and daydreamer in Tidewater Virginia.)

Forties Club Finalist #67

The Waiting Game
by Gef Fox


I hate dogs. I never liked them before, but tonight it's official: I f---ing hate dogs.

He isn't even mine. Some kind of bulldog--ugly as s--- too--that Marty won at a card game. Marty should out here walking this thing up and down the beach. But no, I've gotta do it.

Why Marty even kept it after he won it, I'll never know. He's never owned a dog before. Hell, he can barely take care of himself. If he wasn't so good with locks, Chaz and I wouldn't even need him.

Why the hell didn't Chaz put his foot down and tell him to leave the dog when we picked Marty up? We're just lucky it didn't start barking up a storm when he hit that old man's house.

This wouldn't even be an issue if they hadn't gone back in to grab that damned flatscreen. They dump the loot in the backseat and say they'll be right back, meanwhile I'm sweating bullets behind the wheel just waiting for the cops to roll by.

And since when does a dog eat jewelry? Did he think it was puppy chow?

I didn't even know a dog did that kind of thing. And the balls on Marty to say I pocketed the jewels while they went back inside. Now, just to prove myself, I have to--God, I hate dogs!

How long does it take for a dog to s--- twenty grand worth of diamonds anyway?