Friday, August 25, 2006

Entry #31

Entry #31
by E. Welch


tonight clouds roll in
threatening feeble moonlight
fall's chill in the air

9 comments:

Jaye Wells said...

You can never go wrong with a good haiku.

anne frasier said...

ah, very nice, E.

short and sweet

k. lawson gilbert said...

~strong imagery in a few words~

Joni said...

NICE!

Jim said...

Ah, haiku! And from what I remember of proper haiku structure, this one is well built.

robert rohloff said...

Very good.

linda said...

Short, but I liked what I read.

Bhaswati said...

Refreshing to find a haiku here. Nice lilting tone it has.

jason evans said...

A wonderful sliver of a moment.