Tuesday, January 09, 2007

Entry #34

The Wall
by Chochippie


Every day
Gray
Walls closing in
Suffocating
Strangling
Choking
Wires
Banging my head
Walls
No light
No light
No light
I want
To die

6 comments:

Jeff said...

This piece has a strong emotional quality.

Anonymous said...

Blogger was having issues yesterday and as such it was difficult to leave comments.

So I had to come back today and mention how much I enjoyed this entry.

Anonymous said...

This is really strong - rather gut-wrenching, actually. Well written.

S. W. Vaughn said...

I can definitely see someone in jail thinking along these lines. Well done.

Anonymous said...

A powerful piece with really good emotional tension.

jason evans said...

The extra emphasis on "no light" was perfect.