The Nature of Decay
by Daniel Hatadi
Mould is a decomposer of wood, plants, and animals. Its spores are found wherever there is dead matter. A pile of leaves, manure, compost. A carcass or a body, lying in the rubble alongside the wall of an old building.
The spores move easily through the air, feeding on moisture and warmth, crawling up the wall next to the body. Inside the wall, copper pipes rusted with age provide the flaking paint with water. A speckled pattern appears on the surface, random and chaotic in its beauty.
In the alley next to the wall I wait.
I wait among the garbage and the flies, the smells of long-soiled foods. I wait for those that make the alley their home, surrounding themselves with fortresses of cardboard boxes. As if this would offer them protection.
I wait for one whose hair is matted and grey, face riddled with liver spots, whose life is not far from its end.
I wait until he sleeps.
The spores flee my body like wasps from a nest. They fly towards the old one and seep into his tattered clothes until his decaying skin is covered completely. He will wake and he will scream, but who would care for him in the dead of night, in this sewer of an alley?
No one to help him, but he helps me. He sustains me.
Mould is a decomposer. As am I.
[Sydney crime fiction writer Daniel Hatadi has been a musician, a petrol station attendant, and a software engineer in the poker machine industry. All great fuel for writing about crime, if not committing it. His writing has appeared in Crimespree Magazine, Shots UK and Thrilling Detective.]
Wednesday, January 10, 2007
Subscribe to:
Post Comments (Atom)
19 comments:
Seedy and gritty. You've really captured an aura here. I like this very much.
I feel like I am covered now! Nice.
ooh, very nice, daniel!
Really interesting take, Daniel. Original.
Oh, I liked that. Great voice and cleverly handled. Well done.
nice association
I'll never think of mould the same way again! Nice job.
Nice and creepy. Good job!
eeeeeuuugghhhh! LOVE it! like something put of x-files!
Excellent, I love it.
Nice composition, so to speak. You set a nice mood.
Very creepy. Starts out as a science lesson, but still with a real sense of narrative dread.
Well written. A great story that conjures up very clear pictures.
Thanks very much for the compliments everyone.
I used to rent an apartment in the inner city that had a leaking pipe between the walls. Both the body corporate and the real estate agent didn't seem to care about fixing the problem.
So when mould started appearing on my bedroom and kitchen walls, I got the hell out of there.
You could say this inspired my story. :)
Nice original POV
Hi Daniel,
I like your voice the most, which smacks of pulp and hardboiled detective. This has an entirely unique feel to it.
Oooh, creepy! I love a good horror story. Great work!
Delightfully creepy!
Great visuals here. I like when the narrative is akin to a camera panning with the action. You did that very well.
High marks overall.
Post a Comment