Brambles in the Lavender Darkness
by John Weagly
Brambles are prickly shrubs of the rose family. There are no roses here, just moist, dark odors, a few shafts of sunlight and tall trees, some fallen to the forest floor.
I’m not a violent man. Gretchen and I were married for three years and I never hurt her in the first year or the second. But in the third year she started nagging me, goading me, hounding me and I lost my temper a time or two. The last time she pushed me too far. I’m not a violent man, but I do have my limits.
There are no roses here, in the darkest corner of the woods. But I gave Gretchen a dozen roses on our first date and for every anniversary thereafter. Since this is where she rests, where only I and no one else can find her, to me, these will always be brambles.
Thursday, July 26, 2007
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12 comments:
'I'm not a violent man' - how lovely.
I'm definitely getting paranoid - this is the third comment of mine that didn't get posted -
I liked the story, though. I hope you get the message this time. I particularly liked that subliminal use of brambles.
Victor J. Banis
Chilling - simply chilling.
Kudos!
Dee Laine
Nice and dark, the way I like it.
Probably has happened which makes this so scary. Good use of roses/brambles to express love/loss of love. Good use of the senses.
Love the economy of this and the use of the rose family as a motif
Nicely written. A common theme. What is running through our heads, our brotherhood who bury in the woods? Rose and brambles, solid.
I also like the contrast of roses/brambles in the story. Nice job.
Very good, tight writing which makes for a haunting, chilling tale. Really well handled.
spooky! i like it, very "secret window"...
The use of brambles in imagery and metaphor is excellent.
Reminds me of the tale of Barbara Allen, but in reverse. Tightly written.
High marks!
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