Night Flight
by Tessa Edwards
I fly intransigent
From a past ephemeral day
On a night flight to Paris.
Amongst the starry cosmos
We jet toward the Borealis.
And beneath lie fluid landscapes,
Crests, valleys and nipple hills.
A wild wasted wilderness, the sands
Of that desolate Eastern Erg
Emerging gold against the dawn.
.
Volcanic plugs pierce crystalline rock
Sand fingers, petrified trunks,
Still dark against the dawn.
Mysterious unfinished places,
In this strange Garden of Allah
With the blue cloaked Tuareg
And the wild colocynth melons
Ripening in coarse tangled leaves.
Bleached bones lie strewn jagged,
A necklace turned to dust.
I ask what traveller, voyager
Pilgrim, migrant, fortune hunter, pioneer
Roamed these Dali-esque dunescapes.
What Mozabite, Bedouin, Berber
Trod these crescent paths,
These seifs, this moonscape?
As camel caravans sail silently
‘Cross ochre seas to Agadez.
And vultures soar on thermals
Satanic black against the dawn.
Here, high above the banded altostratus
Ensconced in airless droning comfort
And safe from stinging sand
I know that my salvation lies
In edifice of structure, those monuments
To history, those bricks of occidental culture.
But I will miss the lonely splendour of
Desert, sea and mountain spaces
Now honey bathed against the dawn
On this night flight to Paris.
Friday, January 08, 2010
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24 comments:
Truly a superb piece.
Dare I say "poetry in motion?"
You dare Benita...;-)
I'd never even tried to read poetry before finding Jasons competition.
I'd been missing out badly.
I may have limited poetry knowledge but I know what I like and I like this.
A lot.
beautiful and lyrical
One of the best poems I have read any time lately. Truly beautifully written.
There is a lushness in these verses which brings into mind visions of minarets, starry skies, mysterious women in veils and dark, handsome sheikhs. I loved it. Totally.
*sigh* Lovely. Just lovely.
It's got a very nice verbal aesthetic, and the rhythm is perfectly smoothed. Nicely done.
Dali-esque dunescapes is awesome :D
i have a beautiful vision of a whole new world in my head after reading this...it's like a song - very moving and it kind of makes me weepy but i don't know why...
I'll leave it to the poets to critique. Though I keep experimenting, I don't consider myself one, yet.
All I can say is that I love it.
The imagery is fantastic.
I can almost smell the spices as I read. Beautiful. Paris will be such a let down after this.
Gorgeous. Sumptuous. Intoxicating.
a keeper for sure, tessa, nicely done
:)
I'm stunned! Thank you all SO much for your wonderfully encouraging comments. I'm tickled bright pink - thank you!
So pretty... I love your word choice and where the travels take us!
Lovely. Don't know whether it was me being fanciful, but I found myself reading it with the cadence of slow flapping wings.
Poetry in flight... Just gorgeous.
This flows like water. I particularly like the second and third stanzas. Although the subject matter is different, the images remind me of "Ozymandius"
I met a traveller from an antique land
two vast and trunkless legs of stone
beneath the shattered visage
nothing beside remains
sands stretch far away
Phrases like "sand fingers, petrified trunks, bleached bones, a necklace turned to dust" would fit right in.
Really pretty. Good work.
simply gorgeous
I really like this, the poetic layout and unique phrasing. Very eye catching.
Lovely :)
Reminds me of all the long-haul flights I've sat through, flying over the Sahara between Ireland and South Africa.
I enjoyed this flight very much. Vivid and descriptive. One of my favorites :)
Dear Entrants #1-105,
I have read your pieces so that I can fairly participate in the Readers' Choice vote. (I read all of them through last week, before I started commenting.) I will be coming back around to offer my keep/tweak comment, but I didn't want anyone to snark.
Cheers,
Aerin (#236)
BTW, it's perfectly fine if you still want to snark, but this way you can choose a more appropriate subject, like the new Starbucks paninis or the people over 35 who are exclusively on MySpace
Thank you Chris, kashers, catvibe, Laurel, illyriataylor, CJT, Terri and Harish for taking the time to stop by and read my entry. I value each and every one of your comments...and all the more so because I know what a marathon (a marvellous one, mind you) its been to get through all the entries.
LOL Aerin - promise I won't snark! In fact, I'd be very grateful indeed for your 'keep/tweak' comments.
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