Listening for the words in a quiet corner of the night. The fiction, poetry, and photography of Jason Evans.
Turn your back when she has to use the bush. Save her modesty and look another day for the places where the flame kisses.
very interesting combination words here, not sure i would have ended in modesty though, good thing that is too.
That was pretty intense...I liked how all the random phrases fit together. :)
Walking Man, that is sage advice.Shadow, a curious one, yes.Oddyoddyo13, piece of a strange puzzle, perhaps.
Oh I like this! Like his intensity of emotion ..."and kiss a homicide to her"... And her reticence "(screaming to be saved) modesty"well done!
Oh, nice one, Jason!
Bebo, sometimes I like to pare down poetry this far to bring out a pure thread of thought. I don't think they're popular with everyone, though. But glad you felt it!Karen, thank! Sometimes feelings cut through like a line of few words.
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