Shadow and Light
by Rita L. Smith
Shadow and light played across the wall effectively freaking out Miranda. She grabbed Walter’s arm, “Make it stop! I promise I won’t do that again.”
“Miranda, you conjured it. Now you need to concentrate and let it go.”
“I can’t! I don’t know how!”
“Miranda, you have been studying this for a year now. You can stop it. Just concentrate.”
As Miranda squinted her eyes and wrinkled her brow, Walter guffawed.”
“What?” Miranda asked.
“You looked silly scrunching up your face.”
“I was concentrating.”
“On wrinkling your skin before you turn twenty?”
“Ooh, just shut up. Okay? Or make that stop.”
“Concentrate without the funny faces.”
“That is how I concentrate.”
“It’s not. Act like you’re studying the problem and then just release the spell.”
“Okay, but don’t laugh at me.”
“I won’t even look at you, I promise.”
Miranda thought about the spell and the counter spell. She worked through both problems in her mind. She gasped as clarity hit her. Miranda’s hands danced in a series of complicated gestures that were the exact reverse of the ones she’d used to create the illusion in the first place. When she completed them, she said, “Extinguere!”
“Bravo, Miranda, bravo.”
Miranda blushed. “I should have been able to do that sooner, but I forgot to reverse my hands before.”
“We all make mistakes. Shall we try again, this time without your hands?” Walter asked calmly as the lesson continued.
Thursday, July 14, 2011
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16 comments:
Ah ... I talk with my hands, too. It's hard not to! That's going to be a tough one for her to not do. :)
Your metaphorical use of hands is intriguing. In a magician's world, symbolism plays such an important part. I get the feeling that Miranda has learned more than just hand usage; perhaps she's discovered a piece of herself as well. I really enjoyed the dialogue here; it made clear the close relationship between teacher and student.
Thank you for sharing!
ah, the early spell weaving missteps. I think it was Anne of Green Gables and Mildred Hubble that made me fall in love with clumsy, hapless heroines!
I really loved the dialogues here. They provided effortless reading. I never realized when I reached the end of it.
Thanks for sharing.
They make a delightful pair, don't they? Pleasant and amusing, this bit.
I feel like I'd like to read the larger story that this could be part of!
Wow, thank you all for the kind words. I am blushing. I loved writing this story, though sometimes I don't know where the words come from.
Rita
Spell conjuring, a hazardous profession. Nice!
Dottie :)
Magical!! take care
x
Fun dialogue! ~Jana A.
I thought this was a fun post, and the dialogue was sharp!
magical..
loved it!
I love the idea of magical instruction as something between intimate friends. This works.
I guess for some young conjurers of magic, grasping hand gestures is the same as young mortals grappling with mathematical word problems. This sounds like you had a lot of fun writing it.
Rita - i love your easy-feeling, naturalistic dialogue. You managed to convey the Miranda's personality and that of her patient teacher in a gentle and totally unforced way. I admire that skill.
A slice of life vignette in witchcraft. Solid dialogue. Well done, especially in pacing and storytelling!
Congrats on Forties Club!
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