Living For Our Dream
by Vinay Ravindranath
We were a family, always together. Just the three of us, in the small single bedroom apartment I rented.
I worked in a software company that didn’t pay much, but had managed to save every penny for one thing. She had not spoken even by the age of five, but doctors said that with surgery, an expensive one, we would hear her speak soon. It was our dream, something we prayed for every day all these years. When I got home from work, she would jump into my arms and smile. Yet, she could only write her thoughts on a sheet of paper. I would hug her and go to the verandah and sit there, crying silently, daily.
When she was ten, I got a good job offer, complete with high pay and perks, but I had to go abroad the next day itself. Even though it meant going away from them, I knew it would help realize that dream. I accepted. When I told her, she cried. She wouldn’t leave my shoulder, and I didn’t want to let go either. She held my hand all the way to the airport. Trying not to cry, I extracted her hand and walked away. I turned back to see her silently waving at me. I started to cry. After looking at her for what seemed like an eternity, I stepped on the escalator.
Then I heard the words…
“Daddy, I love you. Don’t leave me.”
We are a family, still together.
Monday, January 12, 2009
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39 comments:
Beautiful,heartwarming story :)
Loved it!
nice...love happy endings!
that was one sweet and touching story :)
wonderful!!! Love conquers all!
Powerful emotions packed in such a little amount of words. Great job
Heart clutching good!
Departure is oh so difficult, but to hear a child say how much they're going to miss you is very precious. Nice job of showing that.
heart grabber, that :)
This story clings to the heart. Thanks, Vinay, for the lovely, poignant tale. :)
thank u sameera! :)
even i love happy endings harshad! thank u! :)
thanks lena :)
yeah peggy :)
love does conquer all! :)
wrath999,
thank you :)
thank u bernardl :)
JR's,
yes, it is! :) thank you for liking it :)
thanks laughingwolf! :)
welcome and thank you sarah :)
What a touching story.
Beautiful as ever, leo
:)
Loved it.
:)
Best of luck
:)
What else is there, but love...beautiful. Thanx
Awwwwww
I am numb from reading all of these entries, but when I reached the ending of your story it cut through all of that numbness and grabbed me hard. Now I'm a puddle. This will be one of my top five choices, thank you for this.
Couldn't agree more with laughingwolf... its truly a heart grabber! And am sorry to make a pun on such an emotional piece but I was drawn in to the story by the line "I worked in a software company that didn’t pay much"... so true man! :-D :-D
That was really well written and heartwarming....loved it...
You almost had me in tears..
Heart-warming and emotional. Thank God it had a happy end...
Beautifully written.
Beautiful, that was... I agree with all the comments out here.. Indeed touching.
Well written :)
daddy, don't you walk so fast.....
very beautifully written. emotional, sweet, nice job.
thank you lauri, for liking my li'l story! :)
thanks riversoul...! :)
thanks gilbert! :)
thanks anks! :)
catvibe,
thanks for liking my story so much, and considering it for the top 5...
aniket...
haaha! :) i don't work now, so i dont get paid much either! :P
thx for liking it! :)
ceedy, thank you! :)
margaret, thank u for liking it..! :)
yamini,
thank u! :)
thanks september! :)
Great job with pacing, entertainment value, storytelling, and voice!
Thanks for being a wonderful part of the contest!
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