Saturday, July 11, 2009

Entry #58

Morning Sun at the Lake
by Ann Barnes


An early morning smile gently rises, removing the last remnants of darkness.

Ascending mist: a reminder of evening’s chill, tenderly engulfed in an ethereal embrace.

Dancing embers on the water’s surface swell in the flickering light.

Warmth slowly spreading its luminous wings, ready for flight.

Reminders of love that has shone before.

Rays never to be forgotten.

18 comments:

laughingwolf said...

love those morning rays...

JR's Thumbprints said...

It's amazing what can be seen in a glass of wine. I'm sure those glasses were empty by morning.

Chris Eldin said...

Lovely imagery!

Catvibe said...

Very tender and visual. Nice.

Aniket said...

Loved those last lines...
"Reminders of love that has shone before.

Rays never to be forgotten"

You've painted a beautiful picture.

The Preacherman said...

I have no bloody idea why I like this so much but I do.

Thank you for that.

Four Dinners x

Sarah Laurenson said...

Beautiful imagery. The flow is wonderful.

Tessa said...

Wonderfully visual - your words make me want to paint the scene.

Sonia said...

Beautiful! and very calming.

Meghan said...

Beautiful. Excellent work.

pjd said...

What Sonia said. Very calming.

Absolute Vanilla (and Atyllah) said...

Beautiful imagery - so rich and evocative.

Amanda F. said...

Vivid and evocative imagery. The dancing embers caught me by surprise.

September said...

dancing embers, flickering light... this is really pretty.
Beautiful work.

JaneyV said...

What a beautiful and evocative piece of writing. I can see the reflections of the crystal glass mirror those on a lake in early morning. Lovely take.

Jade L Blackwater said...

Unfolds like a flower - nicely done.

jason evans said...

A beautiful vision at the dawn of the day. The dance of the first rays.

Jaye Wells said...

Lovely, poetic description. Thanks for sharing it with us.