Morning Sun at the Lake
by Ann Barnes
An early morning smile gently rises, removing the last remnants of darkness.
Ascending mist: a reminder of evening’s chill, tenderly engulfed in an ethereal embrace.
Dancing embers on the water’s surface swell in the flickering light.
Warmth slowly spreading its luminous wings, ready for flight.
Reminders of love that has shone before.
Rays never to be forgotten.
Saturday, July 11, 2009
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18 comments:
love those morning rays...
It's amazing what can be seen in a glass of wine. I'm sure those glasses were empty by morning.
Lovely imagery!
Very tender and visual. Nice.
Loved those last lines...
"Reminders of love that has shone before.
Rays never to be forgotten"
You've painted a beautiful picture.
I have no bloody idea why I like this so much but I do.
Thank you for that.
Four Dinners x
Beautiful imagery. The flow is wonderful.
Wonderfully visual - your words make me want to paint the scene.
Beautiful! and very calming.
Beautiful. Excellent work.
What Sonia said. Very calming.
Beautiful imagery - so rich and evocative.
Vivid and evocative imagery. The dancing embers caught me by surprise.
dancing embers, flickering light... this is really pretty.
Beautiful work.
What a beautiful and evocative piece of writing. I can see the reflections of the crystal glass mirror those on a lake in early morning. Lovely take.
Unfolds like a flower - nicely done.
A beautiful vision at the dawn of the day. The dance of the first rays.
Lovely, poetic description. Thanks for sharing it with us.
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