The Clarity of Night: The Sun Entwines

Monday, April 25, 2011

What better season
when flowers unveil their lace
and green smiles so pure

the walking man said...: I will take days hot
Sweating filled with falling drops
Languid more my style

I am of a mind that the 5-7-5 form is more difficult in English because we use so many polysyllabic words.

Yeah I definitely prefer hot summer to col spring.; April 25, 2011 6:53 AM
Akasha Savage. said...: That was truly beautiful, a little touch of spring. :); April 25, 2011 9:42 AM
Lee said...: I could almost breathe it in ~.; April 25, 2011 11:04 AM
Nevine Sultan said...: Simple and serene.

Nevine; April 26, 2011 11:07 AM
Anonymous said...: Walking Man, I like packing in the weighty multi-syllabic words! Didn't really do it with this one. I wonder how Haiku "feels" in Japanese.

Akasha, many thanks!!

Lee, :) Such a pretty little flower. I took it on Easter. (And yes, I did want to respond to your question. I'm a hardcore agnostic, but I still celebrate.)

Nevine, I could use more of those two things.; April 26, 2011 11:14 PM