The Final Cut
by Roger Dale Trexler
They came.
The loggers ventured into the forest looking for us.
We heard their saws in the distance, and the screams of our brethren as they died. For centuries, we’ve battled the men with axes in the forest, bringing our limbs crashing down, painfully ripping our own appendages from our bodies, and crushing them. One by one, they came; one by one, they died. Many times, others came looking for their fallen friends and met their death. They gave our soil nourishment and helped us grow in God’s light.
Before man, for eons, we lived in peace. We were born, lived our lives, and died in the quiet of the forest. Eventually, man began running amongst us, hunting the wild game. We did not care; it was not our way and we did not understand it, but we were tolerant. We saw them kill for pleasure. We saw and did not understand. Even then, we knew they had no respect for the other creatures of the forest.
Still, they left us alone.
Until they needed our wood.
We know now that it is only a matter of time before they come in larger numbers and destroy us. It is their way. So, we have decided to destroy ourselves before they can. There is a saying amongst men: “if a tree falls in the forest and no one is around, does it make a sound?”
The answer is Yes.
It screams.
Saturday, July 28, 2007
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15 comments:
Vigilante trees! I'm usually not a huge fan of stories from inanimate POV, but if you're going to it, this is how. I enjoyed it. Sweet ending.
I enjoyed when I realized that it was a monologue by one of the trees. Also I like that they are not portrayed as evil.
Clever idea and nicely written! I loved the last few lines in particular.
The last march of the Ents? I liked this, especially the ending.
I agree about the last line - and I liked "the last march of the Ents." Very eco.
... and we were worried about the Spotted Owl...
I like the ending and the way you used the "if a tree falls in the forest and there is no one around, does it make a sound?" Good story.
sad and thought provoking
A tragic topic beautifully handled - a powerful and strong voice. Really well done.
This is a really great piece. It's a really strong message without sounding preachy at all. And really interesting to take the tree's pov.
Well done. It's great to read so many pieces in Halo giving a voice to the trees.
Does a tree make a sound? Yes. It screams. REALLLYYYYYY liked that part of your story which got one of my votes. Congrats on a job well done Roger. Thanks for sharing.
BD
Thanks for the kind words everyone. I'll definitely write another tale for the next contest. Till then, check out my website, www.rogerdaletrexler.com and my blog, www.rogerdaletrexler.blogspot.com
This was my favorite entry. It hit me beaufifully.
I like the image of the dead men feeding the trees. The patience of the trees comes through.
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