Monday, March 31, 2008

Under the Willows, Part 3 (narrative poem)

(A young man yearns to have the power to reach beyond mortal ends. A sensual vampire tale in the tradition of THE HIGHWAYMAN by Alfred Noyes. Just joining us? Go back to Part 1)



The blackness rushed him and took his body
Ripping arms open to icy stars
The hillside blurred and the forest claimed him
His heartbeat engulfed the dark

Suspended high in the nameless shadows
Quivering toes reached for precious ground
The muscled lines of his neck extended
His groan was a trembling sound

A writhing brilliance of lust exploded
Arched and erupting he gasped and screamed
Sensations falling and flying tumbled
His soul spurted scarlet streams

The swirling hurricane winds departed
Shaking he plunged back to lonesome land
He crawled with weary and cold exhaustion
Impossible to withstand

**To be continued**

On to Part 4.
Back to Part 2.

Friday, March 28, 2008

Tunguska, Part 6, Final (fictionalized history)

(In 1908, the last major Earth impact from an asteroid or comet occurred in the unpopulated expanse of eastern Siberia. 830 square miles of boreal forests were leveled. In this latest fictionalized history series, we travel back to 1908 to experience the "Tunguska Event." Prior series: X-ray Martyrs and Westinghoused.)

Just joining us? Go back to Part 1.



Another Dreadful Dinner Party
Essex, England
The Night After Impact, July 1, 1908


The bumbling man's elbow rapped Winston's hand, and a slosh of red swirled from his wine glass onto his silk lapel.
In his other hand, the Chardonnay swayed.

The man turned half around. "Pardon me. So sorry."

He shuffled away after spilling gravy on the buffet table.

A waiter poked a napkin at Winston and dabbed the teardrop stain.

"Fine. Fine. Really," Winston said.

"I'm afraid that might not come out, Sir."

"Indeed."

Winston set the glasses down and reached for a plate. Pearls of caviar glistened in a chilled chaffing dish.

He hesitated.

Looking down at his liver-spotted fingers, he reconsidered and set the plate aside for a second trip.

He found Mrs. Winston by the French doors.

"Would you like to sit on the patio?" she said.

"It would be quieter. This noise is making me ill."

"For me, it's the conversations."

Jewels on her bracelet flared as she opened the way. Outside, voices congregated at the railings and candlelit tables. A color in the western sky glowed like sunset.

"What time is it?" Winston said.

"The clock just chimed ten. I counted."

"Are you sure?"

"Oh yes," she said. "I prayed for the eleventh so we could go."

"It's awfully bright out tonight."

"I don't believe the clock was wrong," she said, looking upward.

Very few stars poked through the curtain of light.

Nearby a banker perused the evening paper. He was an old acquaintance. They were laughing with him earlier.

"May we join you?" Winston said.

"Please." The stout old man motioned to empty chairs. "Curious evening, isn't it?"

The orange feathered to deep blue high overhead.

"Is it the weather?" Mrs. Winston said.

"I don't know. I never seen weather like this."

More people filtered onto the patio from other doors. Words broke through excited conversations, and fingers pointed at what should be night.

"So much for my escape," the banker said, motioning to them.

"We had the same plan," Winston said.

"Each time, I swear I'll never come to another of these events. Yet, here I am."

At the edges of the field stone patio, people gathered. Two people became three, became four. Eyes glittered with the mysterious color.

"It's not often you can read your paper at night," the banker said.

"Maybe when we finish our wine, we'll call an end to the evening," Winston said.

Mrs. Winston stared at the sky. She seemed to drift somewhere over the black forest.

"Darling?" he said. "Do you agree? We shouldn't stay out very late."

"I don't know," she said. The deep wrinkles around her eyes converged on something far away. "Maybe we could have another glass of wine."

The banker turned the page. "You two have a healthy bedtime. I don't sleep well anymore. Haven't for years."

Mrs. Winston sipped, leaving crimson on her lips.

Her body curved. She eased lower in the chair.

Winston's fingers felt fluttery.

"Are you alright?" he said. "Elizabeth?"

The banker peered over his paper.

Winston watched her. "Lizzie?"

Excitement was building around them like a tide claiming more shoreline with each rolling wave.

Lizzie seemed lost in the long expanse of shadowy lawn.

"Is something out there?" Winston said.

She already swallowed the last from her glass.

"I think I'd like some more," she said.

The banker rattled the paper. He was getting fidgety. "I believe I've just about had my fill of the evening," he said. "I don't think our hosts would be terribly offended if I took my leave now."

"No, I think not," Winston said. "Have a safe trip home."

"You do the same."

The banker shuffled off.

Lizzie's glass touched Winston's hand before he turned back to the table.

"Are you sure you're feeling alright?" he said.

Someone laughed nearby.

She drew in some of the night air. Her grey hair flickered red again in the odd light.

He remembered a long ago ocean with moonlight on the foam. Her willowy dress. The feel of cold sand pressing through his toes.

He remembered the feel of her hand.

"Talk with me a while," she said.

She leaned in, intense, and passionate, and young.

"Talk with me a while about anything."

He took a long drink and laughed a low, forgotten laugh.

And under that rarest of skies, he did.


(For two days after the Tunguska event, fine dust brightened the night sky as far away as London. The resulting diffusion of light was reportedly bright enough to read by.)


Back to Part 5.

Wednesday, March 26, 2008

Under the Willows, Part 2 (narrative poem)

(A young man yearns to have the power to reach beyond mortal ends. A sensual vampire tale in the tradition of THE HIGHWAYMAN by Alfred Noyes. Just joining us? Go back to Part 1)



Among the monuments, Collin embraced
Purity won by the grace of death
And oftentimes he found sanctuary
A secretive place to rest

The sculpted roses and angels kneeling
Wept with a yearning for what was lost
He strangely sensed in the soil were hidden
Embraces consigned to dust

The ashen moon, his lovely companion
Painted the writing with ghostly hands
His trembling fingertips traced her name
A soul who might understand

A breeze from eastern horizons whistled
Valleys of trees turned their silver leaves
He felt the footsteps before he heard them
Malevolence shook his knees

**To be continued**

On to Part 3.

(Photo from the historic Laurel Hill Cemetery, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania.)

Tuesday, March 25, 2008

Aerin's April Fool's Fiction Contest

Aerin, one of our new blog friends we met during the "Whispers" contest, is hosting a contest/cocktail party over at In Search of Giants. The task is to finish a story started by Precie. Sounds like a cool idea!

There are prizes and mixed drinks, so be sure to head on over. Entries are due by 5:00 p.m. PST on Friday March 28, 2008.

Monday, March 24, 2008

Pysanky

Aine, who comes from strong Irish (and German) roots, was introduced to threads of Eastern European culture through me. Through extended family, we were introduced to the Ukrainian art of pysanky eggs for Easter. Raw eggs are put through a process of scribing, waxing, and progressive dying, to produce intricate color and geometric patterns. The eggs made by grandmothers and great grandmothers still exist in our family today.

Although the art is dying (no pun intended) and it is getting harder to find the tools and knowledge, Aine was intrigued and wanted to carry on the tradition. Here is her third project (we won't talk about the second and the unfortunate brush with gravity), where she has fused Ukrainian technique with Celtic imagery:



This one was the first attempt. Laying the tiny wax lines takes practice. She was a little shaky at first (but still cool):



That's all for this year, but it was nice to add some fresh colors to the old tradition. As for the Easter egg hunt this year, we had some visitors to spice things up:



Seems like some Garter snakes have gone forth and multiplied.

For those who celebrated, we hope you had a nice holiday!

Friday, March 21, 2008

Under the Willows, Part 1 (narrative poetry)

(A young man yearns to have the power to reach beyond mortal ends. A sensual vampire tale in the tradition of THE HIGHWAYMAN by Alfred Noyes.)



He walked with withering twilight colors
Walled in the halls of a quiet sky
And trilled the lullaby birds to silence
Alone as the daylight died

The curving road in the evening whispered
Collin, his name, on a restless wind
Under the willows the shadows deepened
And hid every trace of him

Beyond the marsh and its blackened ripples
Fenced from the forest, a lonely home
With windows flickering through the darkness
Inspiring the lost to roam

The night's first feathery rays of moonlight
Fell on the gates and the mildewed stone
He spied the graves in the nearby distance
Beside the less traveled roads


**To be continued**

On to Part 2.


(Jaye Wells has been hosting a vampire fest in honor of her upcoming debut novel, Red-Headed Stepchild. It got me thinking about the carnal themes of desire and seduction in the old vampire stories. I've been feeling like trying my hand at narrative poetry, and now I can thank Jaye for a theme.)

Wednesday, March 19, 2008

Understanding



Forms sculpted into hidden forms. Your hues pirouette into shadows.

Whisper to my fingertips.

I will discover you.


(Photo taken at Longwood Gardens, Kennett Square, Pennsylvania)

Monday, March 17, 2008

Happy St. Patrick's Day!



In honor of St. Patrick's Day, I thought I'd dust off my favorite poem from the Clarity of Night. The Celtic theme is strong in this one. It's my vision of Ireland or the wind-blown shores of Scotland.

I originally posted it on November 30, 2005. I still have contact with several of the folks who commented back then. I suppose that's the blogger's gift. A heartfelt thanks to those who have stayed with me!




The Piper's Gift
Flame in the wind
Entwined by night,
The hills beyond shadowy panes,
A flickering gaze
The failing light
Beholds a gathering rain.

Yet, in the dark,
Enchantments green
A forest embraces the trees.
And faintly descends
The salty seed
of misty, thundering seas.

Listen. Be still.
A distant voice
With curious harmonies weaves
Like memories weep
From broken sleep
The piper laughs while he grieves.

Friday, March 14, 2008

Only Questions



"What was your childhood like?"

"It was okay."

"Just okay?"

"It was fine. I don't have any complaints. My parents stayed together. We had a nice house. My father had a good job. We got to do fun things."

"How did you spend your time?"

"I went to school. I played. The normal stuff."

"No, what did you do in your free time? Did you hang out with the neighborhood kids?"

"Well, I was really good at entertaining myself. I had all sorts of interests. Crazy things. Like science and astronomy. Or making up stories. Sometimes I built things."

"Are you an only child?"

"Yes."

"Did you wish you had a brother or a sister?"

"Oh no. My friends with brothers and sisters were always fighting. It used to bother me. I couldn't understand what the big deal was. Why they got so mad. It's okay if the little brother plays with us. Really, who cares?"

"Why did that bother you?"

"All the conflict. It just seemed so draining. Emotionally draining."

"So you spent a lot of time with these friends with brothers and sisters?"

"Sure. Now and then."

"What do you mean?"

"Well, I moved when I was growing up. That upset the applecart, so to speak. I lost all my friends twice. And people change."

"How so?"

"Well, I had one friend who moved in next door and was in the grade over me. After a little while, he met a kid in his class who lived farther away, but was in bike range."

"So he drifted away?"

"They saw each other all day in school. It made sense."

"Any others?"

"After I moved, I made a friend next door, but he got girl-crazy around 14. He went off with her. I ended up lecturing them about birth control. You know, really simple stuff. The idiots had a pregnancy scare."

"Did friends often look to you for advice?"

"Absolutely. The story of my life."

"Who did you go to for advice?"

"I had some very cool teachers in school."

"You asked them about birth control?"

"No. No. Of course not."

"So who did you go to for the deep things? The personal things?"

"Well, no one, I guess."

"How about parents?"

"No way!"

"Why do you say that so strongly?"

"Well, you know like when no matter how much you try to explain yourself, the other person just doesn't seem to be hearing you?"

"Yes."

"That's how it was. Like there was this phantom person standing twelve inches to my left. I'm waving, hey, you guys, I'm over here."

"Isn't some of that normal?"

"You tell me. My mother, for example, thinks she taught me to be the most considerate, respectful person in the world."

"Did she?"

"Not the way she thinks. In her eyes, I'm the equivalent of a 12-year-old kid who remembered to say thank you to the nice lady."

"What about your father?"

"My father likes to bring up the good old days. When I used to have this huge smile. When I used to have a belly laugh."

"Don't you laugh any more?"

"Not around them."

"Why?"

"There's no frame of reference. We're not speaking the same language. They're talking about one thing, and my mind is flying off to another. I'm polite. I nod and smile when I'm supposed to. I used to laugh like that when I didn't feel so alienated from them."

"Why don't you talk about what you want to talk about?"

"I tried that."

"What happened?"

"They looked at me like I had three heads."

"Why so?"

"Well, to be fair, my mother looked at me like that. Her eyes would blank out. The blue screen came up. Can't compute, system overload."

"Your father was different?"

"Yes, but actually worse. He understood more and just didn't like it. He felt that I was being difficult. Competitive."

"Were you competitive?

"No. I certainly wasn't trying to be. You have to understand, he had quite a few problems of his own. When my parents eventually divorced, he accused me of letting my mother choose me over him."

"What did you say to that?"

"I told him it wasn't my job to save his marriage. He had to fix things with my mother on his own."

"How are things now with him?"

"Polite. Sometimes he wants to reconnect. Other times the old jealousies come out."

"All this was going on when you were growing up?"

"There's more. But you get the idea."

"So, while you were giving advice, being the stable and responsible one, who was there for you to lean on?"

"I feel like I'm shrugging my shoulders a lot tonight."

"What was that like?"

"I don't know.... I'm not sure. I just don't know...."

"Are you okay?"

"Yes."

"Are you sure?"

"I was just thinking. Maybe I'm realizing that the things that bother me now aren't so different than the ones back then. Just different faces on similar problems. Maybe the truth is more painful, and I need to resolve that before I can move on."

"The truth of what your childhood was like?"

"Yeah, because I let myself spend most of it alone."

*Digg It*

Wednesday, March 12, 2008

The Conference Which Burns with Fire and Brimstone

~~7:10 a.m.

I'm dreading today.

I have that gravity feel. All I want to do is sleep. The world is battleship grey, and because of daylight savings time, the cars still have their headlights on. I feel like I'm traveling and just left my budget hotel room. Distant traffic hums on the highway. The pancake house next door is hopping.

~~10:00 a.m.

Welcome to my personal hell. Two-day continuing legal education courses. Have a seat and make yourself comfortable. Not.



~~12:15 p.m.

One morning down! Time to celebrate!! Lunch in China Town!!!



~~3:05 p.m.

Won Ton high over.

So sad.

Work calls. Email.

Make them go away.

I could write something. Or run through some plot ideas. But people are scrambling my brain.

I'll do a Limerick instead. An emo Limerick.

Hey, is it St. Patrick's day yet?

Once a premed, I'm a lawyer
Now looking on colleagues like a voyeur
     The False Claims Act is changing
     Health care's decaying
It would rock to have written Tom Sawyer

Monday, March 10, 2008

Lulls in the Storm



Lulls in the storm, her
Gusting breaths--

                  Hawks screeching rain
                  Waves on the tide

Thundering sinews
Gallop red--

                  Legs buckle maimed
                  Mountains inside

Predators leaping
Teeth lick flesh--

                  Prey without pain
                  Silently cry

Friday, March 07, 2008

Remember: Archibald McCall Holding



The Remembrance Series: When I walk among old graves, I think about the voices struggling to endure. Someday not even stone will hold our memory.

We can give these voices a little more life in a way they never could have imagined. So please take a moment with me to remember....


Inscription:
Archibald
McCall
Holding
1862-1935

~~~
A touch of Ireland
Under a dead year's leaves
Dreaming of foam and oceans
Awaiting the blush of green

~~~

Wednesday, March 05, 2008

Shores of Spring

Comments are now added to each contest entry from Jason, and Aine has about half to go. Thank you, everyone, for sharing your "Whispers."

Now, it's time to dispel the ghosts. Here is the "Shores of Spring," a bagpipe serenade to the coming sights and colors of spring.





--Jason Evans
John Walsh Shuttle Pipes
"The Shores of Argyll"

Monday, March 03, 2008

Winners Announcement--"Whispers" Short Fiction Contest

Drum roll please!

It's my pleasure to recognize the following writers:


1st Place--JOSH VOGT, They Call Him... (#15)
[Prize: $25 Amazon gift certificate, 8 x 10 print of the "Whispers" photograph (inscribed by Jason Evans)]

2nd Place--MICHAEL PELC, Trees Don't Dream (#54)
[Prize: $20 Amazon gift certificate]

3rd Place--PRECIE, Holding On (#51)
[Prize: $15 Amazon gift certificate]

4th Place--REBECCA LAKE, Please (#26)
[Prize: $10 Amazon gift certificate]

5th Place--HOODIE, My Dog Has Fleas (#48)
[Prize: $5 Amazon gift certificate]

Honorable Mention--DINA LYNSKEY, Breakfast with Sarah (#7)

Honorable Mention--JOHN MCAULEY, Walden's (#44)

Honorable Mention--DAVE WATTERS, A Time Past (#46)

Honorable Mention--THERESE, Point of View (#62)

Honorable Mention--ANGELIQUE H. CAFFREY, Out on a Limb (#73)


READERS' CHOICE AWARD:

Readers' Choice--SARAH HINA, Christina's World (#45)
[Prize: $15 Amazon gift certificate, 8 x 10 print of the "Whispers" photograph (inscribed by Jason Evans)]

1st Runner-Up--REBECCA LAKE, Please (#26)

2nd Runner-Up--AERIN ROSE, November (#57)

3rd Runner-Up--PAUL LIADIS, Tastes Like Brains (#17)

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I have to say that never before did I have so many entries score 40 or above in my scoring system (out of 45 points). I was confident of the top 5, but the honorable mentions were killers. So many could be in that list. Choosing was painful. Also, because Readers' Choice voting was strong for several entries, I decided to recognize three runners-up in addition to the winner.

You all deserve a massive round of applause. This contest has set a record for mutual support and comments. Everyone has something valuable to take away.

STATS
Just how successful was it? Your 73 entries have generated 18,750 hits from 6,041 unique visitors! I'm grateful for such a wonderful turnout.

MORE COMMENTS
Over the course of next few days, Aine and I will be adding comments to each entry saying what each of us liked best about it. So much talent here. Wow!

KEEP THE COMMUNITY GOING
Don't let the community end here. I hope to see all of you back at The Clarity of Night and on your own blogs. I'd love to trade links if you're up to it!

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Thanks again for a great contest experience and for all of the excellent writing. Give the winners a pat on the back for their outstanding work.

The Clarity of Night will now be powering down from contest mode and returning to normal content. At this point, I'm planning to hold the next contest in early July. Check back Wednesday when I will serenade you on the Scottish smallpipes!

It's been great fun! Feel free to contact me anytime.

You will always find a welcoming place here.

Sunday, March 02, 2008

**READERS' CHOICE VOTING IS CLOSED**

The winners announcement for the "Whispers" Short Fiction Contest will be tomorrow morning.

Judging is finished, and many votes have come in. The stage is being prepared.

Sleep tight!